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[title] => ''The Life''
[time] => 2009-10-18 20:04:15
[hometext] => This is my first ever poem........ever. So consider that in critiquing and let me know what you think.
[bodytext] => I look at all the fancy screens across them flash the prolific scenes of drugs,violence,sex and things a kid just shouldnt see The parents arent there theyre at the job fair looking for a way to survive 40 years pass by they grow old and die kids now where they once were this is the life that cuts like a knife right through through fabric of time oh look at the trail [comments] => 1 [counter] => 133 [topic] => 43 [informant] => tad2211 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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