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Array ( [sid] => 15421 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Warning Label [time] => 2003-04-01 19:13:45 [hometext] => Of late I have had lots going through my mind and looking over a lot of very old letters. My pen went to paper at 4 in the morning to follow the thought pattern. I suppose the title is the warning label for me. [bodytext] => Reach down inside
inside to where the darkness resides
to where the emptyness and depression lives
feel it grow
feel it pulse with every heart beat
remember the last time you where truelly happy
the last time someone disolved your world
disolved all your cares, fears and pain
can you remember
of course you can remember
remember so vividly
so bright
now feel the darkness surge with rememberance
it expands and consumes remembering their smile
their laugh
the way they looked at you
and with every memory surging over you
you feel your barriers fracture and chip
and know that behind that barrier is a wave of tears
you feel like piercing your chest to let that hollow feeling disapear
as the pain is a dull ach that can't be forgotten
it cannot be nullified
you look to friends
look deep in to their souls
knowing that you cant find what you are looking for
search as you will
feeling as if you have been cast aside
cast aside like a childrens toy
in to a field of mist
cold and alone
lost in the tears and oblivion
and know then
not think
know
know that you created the darkness
created that hollow pain
rage in frustration
for you know you have no one to be angry at
no reason to feel sorry for yourself
and you also know thatyou deserve it
you deserve the pain
for you have looked in to their souls
souls and hearts that you have destroyed for an instent
watched their tears
felt their hurt
and just wanting to say you take it back
you didn't mean it
but you do mean it
so you don't take it back
and still you watch
watch till you can't bare it
until their pain is too much
feeling your own hear torn in to a million pieces
as you have done to theirs
but still you watch and try to comfort until the tears receed
when you have seen that
fealt that
tasted it's bitter fruit
wanted to slash your wrists to get away from allt he pain you have created
then I will welcome you to my world [comments] => 3 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Jester [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Warning Label

Contributed by Jester on Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 07:13:45 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Reach down inside
inside to where the darkness resides
to where the emptyness and depression lives
feel it grow
feel it pulse with every heart beat
remember the last time you where truelly happy
the last time someone disolved your world
disolved all your cares, fears and pain
can you remember
of course you can remember
remember so vividly
so bright
now feel the darkness surge with rememberance
it expands and consumes remembering their smile
their laugh
the way they looked at you
and with every memory surging over you
you feel your barriers fracture and chip
and know that behind that barrier is a wave of tears
you feel like piercing your chest to let that hollow feeling disapear
as the pain is a dull ach that can't be forgotten
it cannot be nullified
you look to friends
look deep in to their souls
knowing that you cant find what you are looking for
search as you will
feeling as if you have been cast aside
cast aside like a childrens toy
in to a field of mist
cold and alone
lost in the tears and oblivion
and know then
not think
know
know that you created the darkness
created that hollow pain
rage in frustration
for you know you have no one to be angry at
no reason to feel sorry for yourself
and you also know thatyou deserve it
you deserve the pain
for you have looked in to their souls
souls and hearts that you have destroyed for an instent
watched their tears
felt their hurt
and just wanting to say you take it back
you didn't mean it
but you do mean it
so you don't take it back
and still you watch
watch till you can't bare it
until their pain is too much
feeling your own hear torn in to a million pieces
as you have done to theirs
but still you watch and try to comfort until the tears receed
when you have seen that
fealt that
tasted it's bitter fruit
wanted to slash your wrists to get away from allt he pain you have created
then I will welcome you to my world




Copyright © Jester ... [ 2003-04-01 19:13:45]
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Re: Warning Label (User Rating: 1 )
by ravenblack_phoenix on Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 11:47:41 PM AEST
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Wow... Don't you just love it when you start writing and it just spills out of you? I know the feelings you've painted with your words here, and I must admit, to the surprise of many (sarcasm of course) that they really... very much so... severely... suck. But you've written this very well, I like it.


Re: Warning Label (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanna on Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 11:15:35 PM AEST
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My GOD, your use of imagery is just AMAZING! Can't wait to read the next one :)


Re: Warning Label (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 01:41:38 PM AEST
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Loved this... spoke to me deeply. I feel a lot like this at times. Thnx for sharing this with us.

Bobo (Joel)




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