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Array ( [sid] => 154205 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Perfect World [time] => 2009-10-18 11:10:41 [hometext] => Dreams of the perfect world... [bodytext] => Close your eyes just for a moment
And imagine the perfect world
Without deceases and wars at all,
Where the people absolutely happy
And take care of the ones they love,
Where the lie has got rid as the word,
And the chivalry is still alive
In everybody's heart.

Ain't it awesome to live
In the world like this
Where your lover's life
Means everything to you.
And night vanishes in a light,
And the world's ruled by the truth.
Where's nor the villains neither the riches
And everybody's equal.
But this perfect world is unreal,
We just can dream of something like this.

Don't open your eyes, keep them closed,
I'm gonna reach out and take your hand,
Do you see me in your made-up world,
Or my outlines are still blurry?
I see the things you see in the dreams,
As clearly as you do only in reality,
My world is not so perfect as I'd like it to be,
But I can make it like this if you help me,
We can make our own little perfect world.

Ain't it awesome to live
In the world like this
Where your lover's life
Means everything to you.
And night vanishes in a light,
And the world's ruled by the truth.
Where's nor the villains neither the riches
And everybody's equal.
But this perfect world is unreal,
We just can dream of something like this.

For the time being we can just dream
Of the world like this,
But love is alive now and then,
And that make our world perfect,
It is as long as you hold my hand,
As long as we can dream of the future
And don't try to predict events.
I just wanna live in present, with you
In our own little perfect world.

Ain't it awesome to live
In the world like this
Where your lover's life
Means everything to you.
And night vanishes in a light,
And the world's ruled by the truth.
Where's nor the villains neither the riches
And everybody's equal.
But this perfect world is unreal,
We just can dream of something like this.

Open your eyes...
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The Perfect World

Contributed by Alexa_Bachtel on Sunday, 18th October 2009 @ 11:10:41 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Close your eyes just for a moment
And imagine the perfect world
Without deceases and wars at all,
Where the people absolutely happy
And take care of the ones they love,
Where the lie has got rid as the word,
And the chivalry is still alive
In everybody's heart.

Ain't it awesome to live
In the world like this
Where your lover's life
Means everything to you.
And night vanishes in a light,
And the world's ruled by the truth.
Where's nor the villains neither the riches
And everybody's equal.
But this perfect world is unreal,
We just can dream of something like this.

Don't open your eyes, keep them closed,
I'm gonna reach out and take your hand,
Do you see me in your made-up world,
Or my outlines are still blurry?
I see the things you see in the dreams,
As clearly as you do only in reality,
My world is not so perfect as I'd like it to be,
But I can make it like this if you help me,
We can make our own little perfect world.

Ain't it awesome to live
In the world like this
Where your lover's life
Means everything to you.
And night vanishes in a light,
And the world's ruled by the truth.
Where's nor the villains neither the riches
And everybody's equal.
But this perfect world is unreal,
We just can dream of something like this.

For the time being we can just dream
Of the world like this,
But love is alive now and then,
And that make our world perfect,
It is as long as you hold my hand,
As long as we can dream of the future
And don't try to predict events.
I just wanna live in present, with you
In our own little perfect world.

Ain't it awesome to live
In the world like this
Where your lover's life
Means everything to you.
And night vanishes in a light,
And the world's ruled by the truth.
Where's nor the villains neither the riches
And everybody's equal.
But this perfect world is unreal,
We just can dream of something like this.

Open your eyes...

Copyright © Alexa_Bachtel ... [ 2009-10-18 11:10:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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