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Array ( [sid] => 154189 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I like rambling around the city with you [time] => 2009-10-18 00:39:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I like rambling around the city with you
2008-07-12 23:30:50
I like rambling around the city with you



An impromptu visit with you breaks up the long afternoon,

you ask me for a walk around the city,

of course I love!



How nice!

when we are taking a promiscuous stroll,

the sunshine is our best company,

when we go through the street,

many people's eyes fall upon us.



Yes,

I like rambling around the city with you.

In the past days,

Our stories flew upward every day,

our love grew up every night.

Whenever we went jogging,

our song was always waving in the wind.



Sun in the afternoon,

still shining in our face,

and make me indulge in reveries about our future.

I wonder why,

I always like to live in a world of fantasy.



With you together,

I am always free,

nothing can stop me to look forward,

for with you together,

I am as light as the wind,

oh, sure enough,

I am as light as the air.



When we step across the street,

you take my hand.

When I look down,

I just find the way under my feet.

Oh, sorry,

my heart is so lost.



Yes,

just now,

my heart flew to a free world,

where it was very clean and high,

the flowers were opening,

the birds were singing,

I saw us climbing toward a high hill.

Yes,

we are going to enjoy the beautiful view.



Yes,

I like rambling with you.

With you together,

it is just my luck.

now,

I may just as well tell you the truth,

if you are not here,

I will ache all over......









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I like rambling around the city with you

Contributed by holy on Sunday, 18th October 2009 @ 12:39:52 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I like rambling around the city with you
2008-07-12 23:30:50
I like rambling around the city with you



An impromptu visit with you breaks up the long afternoon,

you ask me for a walk around the city,

of course I love!



How nice!

when we are taking a promiscuous stroll,

the sunshine is our best company,

when we go through the street,

many people's eyes fall upon us.



Yes,

I like rambling around the city with you.

In the past days,

Our stories flew upward every day,

our love grew up every night.

Whenever we went jogging,

our song was always waving in the wind.



Sun in the afternoon,

still shining in our face,

and make me indulge in reveries about our future.

I wonder why,

I always like to live in a world of fantasy.



With you together,

I am always free,

nothing can stop me to look forward,

for with you together,

I am as light as the wind,

oh, sure enough,

I am as light as the air.



When we step across the street,

you take my hand.

When I look down,

I just find the way under my feet.

Oh, sorry,

my heart is so lost.



Yes,

just now,

my heart flew to a free world,

where it was very clean and high,

the flowers were opening,

the birds were singing,

I saw us climbing toward a high hill.

Yes,

we are going to enjoy the beautiful view.



Yes,

I like rambling with you.

With you together,

it is just my luck.

now,

I may just as well tell you the truth,

if you are not here,

I will ache all over......













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