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See me world rip apart at the seams
My mind lately it yells at me it screams
What am I to do?

Problems all around
It’s the only sound
I can hear,
On voice in fear
Another in rage

It’s all setting the stage
For when I fall apart
Each voice has a place in my heart
But what do I do?
How can I help you?

This is getting so hard to take
What do you do when things sense they just don’t make
If you look at it from out side my view it’s very plain
But from my eyes, it’s insane
See through my friends daily disguises

They all hurt deep down
I try to help
Listen to the sound
Of their trouble voices
But they are all drowned out

Overpowered but the yell
Of my mind screaming in it’s own hell
All the people in my heart
Their lives are falling apart

But will they see
That it’s not only them
Madness is taking over me
And so my world rips apart at the seams [comments] => 1 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Voice of the Silent [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

My World Rips Apart at the Seams

Contributed by Voice of the Silent on Saturday, 17th October 2009 @ 08:30:39 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Come one come all
See me world rip apart at the seams
My mind lately it yells at me it screams
What am I to do?

Problems all around
It’s the only sound
I can hear,
On voice in fear
Another in rage

It’s all setting the stage
For when I fall apart
Each voice has a place in my heart
But what do I do?
How can I help you?

This is getting so hard to take
What do you do when things sense they just don’t make
If you look at it from out side my view it’s very plain
But from my eyes, it’s insane
See through my friends daily disguises

They all hurt deep down
I try to help
Listen to the sound
Of their trouble voices
But they are all drowned out

Overpowered but the yell
Of my mind screaming in it’s own hell
All the people in my heart
Their lives are falling apart

But will they see
That it’s not only them
Madness is taking over me
And so my world rips apart at the seams

Copyright Â© Voice of the Silent ... [ 2009-10-17 20:30:39]
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Re: My World Rips Apart at the Seams (User Rating: 1 )
by Mars on Saturday, 17th October 2009 @ 09:20:27 PM AEST
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Forceful, unusual. Instability. Confusion. Yes, I like it.

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