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The end is in sight. There is no reason remaining to fight. From the very beginning the outcome was not a mystery, but the process had to be done. It was never a battle of wits or a power struggle. The steps had to be taken in order to reach the destination sought. Internal peace. Only now that the end is in clear view can wounds be completely healed and the missing pieces made whole.

During the days of the battle there is an unimaginable pain that burns inside the soul. Although not always shown to those around, it takes a toll on them as well. The procedure of give and take between man and his maker is really nothing more than the man trying to justify actions taken and actions about to be taken. It is most prudent that certain feelings and thoughts be kept in check while this happens. The time will arrive when they are to be set free once more. The most important aspect to keep in mind is that as the battle comes to an end, if you survive, it will be God’s way that things should be done. It takes a strong will to battle a giant, but a smart person knows when it is time to give up the fight.

The giant will never take your life; you do that on your own by continuing the daily fighting. Loss of appetite and sleep are only a part of the cost. The systematic breakdown of daily life happens quickly. Alienation of those who genuinely care for you is a high price to pay.

For some the battle proves too much and self elimination is the end result.

For me, it is now time to get back to the reason God has placed me here.


Deadwriter
10/15/2009

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Conversations with God – The Battle Ends

Contributed by deadwriter on Saturday, 17th October 2009 @ 05:50:02 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Conversations with God – The Battle Ends

The end is in sight. There is no reason remaining to fight. From the very beginning the outcome was not a mystery, but the process had to be done. It was never a battle of wits or a power struggle. The steps had to be taken in order to reach the destination sought. Internal peace. Only now that the end is in clear view can wounds be completely healed and the missing pieces made whole.

During the days of the battle there is an unimaginable pain that burns inside the soul. Although not always shown to those around, it takes a toll on them as well. The procedure of give and take between man and his maker is really nothing more than the man trying to justify actions taken and actions about to be taken. It is most prudent that certain feelings and thoughts be kept in check while this happens. The time will arrive when they are to be set free once more. The most important aspect to keep in mind is that as the battle comes to an end, if you survive, it will be God’s way that things should be done. It takes a strong will to battle a giant, but a smart person knows when it is time to give up the fight.

The giant will never take your life; you do that on your own by continuing the daily fighting. Loss of appetite and sleep are only a part of the cost. The systematic breakdown of daily life happens quickly. Alienation of those who genuinely care for you is a high price to pay.

For some the battle proves too much and self elimination is the end result.

For me, it is now time to get back to the reason God has placed me here.


Deadwriter
10/15/2009





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Re: Conversations with God – The Battle Ends (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Saturday, 17th October 2009 @ 06:55:02 PM AEST
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I am glad the battle is ending for you and you can move on doing what you have been placed in this world to do. I have been worried about you based on the last few pieces you have written. I hope you have many days of happiness ahead of you.

Heidi


Re: Conversations with God – The Battle Ends (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 17th October 2009 @ 07:23:13 PM AEST
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Thank you, my friend...for sharing this ...and for the first two parts... My thoughts are in the e-mail....
Love and hugs...
Me


Re: Conversations with God – The Battle Ends (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 19th October 2009 @ 06:55:15 PM AEST
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Incredible verse my friend. I think at times we all go through that moment of a battle, be it external or internal, then the path to peace.

Stong!

Hugs you
love you tons

Michelle


Re: Conversations with God – The Battle Ends (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 06:02:54 PM AEST
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This is an awesome write!!




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