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Array ( [sid] => 154165 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Out Of Control [time] => 2009-10-17 08:12:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Out of control,
unable to stop,
this feeling from within,
tired and angry,
every little mishap,
sends me in a fury.
Want to kill you all,
want to destroy,
all the love i see.
Unstoppable, there's no longer just one of me,
every face i have,
has his own personality,
fighting to get to the surface.
I wield my bloodstained pen,
get in my way,
and i'll stab you through your heart.
No longer do i feel,
the love that i should hold,
now i peel the flesh,
from around my putrid mould.
Underneath my mask you'll see,
the anger, the hate, the destructability.
I sometimes wonder about my sanity,
when i want to kill you all.
Need to destroy,
every bit of love i see,
give me a gun,
i'll put a bullet in your brain,
make sure,
nothing can remain,
but an empty torso,
for me to kick around.
Need to kill you all,
need to stop you all,
give me a rope,
i'll tie it round your neck,
pull you down,
till we're face to face,
no matter of color, creed or race,
i am out of control,
unable to stop,
this feeling from within. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 133 [topic] => 6 [informant] => bruce75 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Out Of Control

Contributed by bruce75 on Saturday, 17th October 2009 @ 08:12:45 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Out of control,
unable to stop,
this feeling from within,
tired and angry,
every little mishap,
sends me in a fury.
Want to kill you all,
want to destroy,
all the love i see.
Unstoppable, there's no longer just one of me,
every face i have,
has his own personality,
fighting to get to the surface.
I wield my bloodstained pen,
get in my way,
and i'll stab you through your heart.
No longer do i feel,
the love that i should hold,
now i peel the flesh,
from around my putrid mould.
Underneath my mask you'll see,
the anger, the hate, the destructability.
I sometimes wonder about my sanity,
when i want to kill you all.
Need to destroy,
every bit of love i see,
give me a gun,
i'll put a bullet in your brain,
make sure,
nothing can remain,
but an empty torso,
for me to kick around.
Need to kill you all,
need to stop you all,
give me a rope,
i'll tie it round your neck,
pull you down,
till we're face to face,
no matter of color, creed or race,
i am out of control,
unable to stop,
this feeling from within.

Copyright © bruce75 ... [ 2009-10-17 08:12:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Out Of Control (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 17th October 2009 @ 09:12:00 AM AEST
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wow. I get this. Damn! I SO get this. There comes a breaking
point in life where darkness closes in and all the selfish, pompous,
self centred idiots bleed us dry. And what is left of the empty shell
is not so pretty. Perfectly worded.

~ Breezy

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