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Array ( [sid] => 154153 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wish me luck [time] => 2009-10-17 00:12:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>

Wish me luck
2008-07-03 14:55:18
Wish me luck

Singing in distance resounded through out the rain,

we were hand in hand under an eave.

When I saw two swallows nesting under the eave,

it did my heart pretty good,

I found it really surprising,

I hoped they put more heart into their singing.

I imagined there would be coming a loving wedding,

so I wished the play much more verve,

and hoped we could see the wedding going.

In my heart,

I was praying and sending them the greater blessing.

I led your view there,

and whispering you I guessed there would be coming a wedding.

You laughted shortly,

“I am not sure,

But I know they are new here.”

You saw me still looking up there,

then added,

“Haha.

Well,

that sounds like fun,

I will follow your thought,

and wish them a warm sun.

Haha,

why not imagine many lovely babies will be given birth soon.”

I was glad to hear that,

“I wish I could see their wedding going,

also hope I can see the lovely babies coming,

all will be exciting.”

“You want to look good for their wedding?

But it is time to go home.

Look,

the rain stop.”

heard you urging me,

I just found the rain had hid,

it seemed the rain heard of our talking,

suddenly I felt my thought was really interesting.

On the way to your home,

I told you the dinner you did yesterday evening was great,

“That looked incredible!

Will you make it again some time?”

“Sure, whenever you want.”

you said in delight.

“Really?

You are awesome.

How about tomorrow?”

asked I.

“Tomorrow?

Tomorrow it is!,

Anything for you!”

you put your hand on my shoulder,

and told me your home was just around the corner.

“Do you think I will win?

I am really nervous about it.

wish me luck?”

looking over there,

I felt my heart beated faster and faster.

Immediately remembered I was going to my interview then,

I was too lost to ask,

and said to myself good luck.

“Believe me,

this is the first time I have fallen in love,

you are mine.

Really,

I enjoy your company happily.”

you put your hand on my shoulder again,

looking down at me with strange golden-lighted eyes,

very tender,

but with a curious devilish look lurking underneath......
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Wish me luck

Contributed by holy on Saturday, 17th October 2009 @ 12:12:52 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Wish me luck
2008-07-03 14:55:18
Wish me luck

Singing in distance resounded through out the rain,

we were hand in hand under an eave.

When I saw two swallows nesting under the eave,

it did my heart pretty good,

I found it really surprising,

I hoped they put more heart into their singing.

I imagined there would be coming a loving wedding,

so I wished the play much more verve,

and hoped we could see the wedding going.

In my heart,

I was praying and sending them the greater blessing.

I led your view there,

and whispering you I guessed there would be coming a wedding.

You laughted shortly,

“I am not sure,

But I know they are new here.”

You saw me still looking up there,

then added,

“Haha.

Well,

that sounds like fun,

I will follow your thought,

and wish them a warm sun.

Haha,

why not imagine many lovely babies will be given birth soon.”

I was glad to hear that,

“I wish I could see their wedding going,

also hope I can see the lovely babies coming,

all will be exciting.”

“You want to look good for their wedding?

But it is time to go home.

Look,

the rain stop.”

heard you urging me,

I just found the rain had hid,

it seemed the rain heard of our talking,

suddenly I felt my thought was really interesting.

On the way to your home,

I told you the dinner you did yesterday evening was great,

“That looked incredible!

Will you make it again some time?”

“Sure, whenever you want.”

you said in delight.

“Really?

You are awesome.

How about tomorrow?”

asked I.

“Tomorrow?

Tomorrow it is!,

Anything for you!”

you put your hand on my shoulder,

and told me your home was just around the corner.

“Do you think I will win?

I am really nervous about it.

wish me luck?”

looking over there,

I felt my heart beated faster and faster.

Immediately remembered I was going to my interview then,

I was too lost to ask,

and said to myself good luck.

“Believe me,

this is the first time I have fallen in love,

you are mine.

Really,

I enjoy your company happily.”

you put your hand on my shoulder again,

looking down at me with strange golden-lighted eyes,

very tender,

but with a curious devilish look lurking underneath......

Copyright Â© holy ... [ 2009-10-17 00:12:52]
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