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Array ( [sid] => 154141 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Memories Melody [time] => 2009-10-16 18:28:25 [hometext] => I decided to create a piece using the titles from each piece I have posted. It has been a struggle but, here it is … also a special thanks to Jecks beloved friend and poet. [bodytext] => So … Blue, the color of my world

A Hushed, Unwritten Symphony

Cried a long and lonely heartfelt note

Reaching for a soul, Lost in the Sadness

Left drowning in the Darkness of Sorrow

Unanswered melody of forgiveness

Child’s Play to my demons

Heart Song left bleeding

Your Lustful Blade

Wields a Tempest Wake

A Legacy, Fashioned in Time

Through the Looking Glass, I dream

If Only for a Moment … Deliver Me

This Indifference Hurts, leaving me

Penned In, Security Undone

5 Senses Scream pleading for normality

Allowing me to Just Be

Breathless from the effort

Emotional Infidelity leaving my world’s song

Broken

A Hushed, Unwritten Symphony
So … Blue the color of my world


Peace
~Shannon Musser~

Addendum: There may be a rewrite coming soon in the form of a song … with any luck we will put it to music and be able to hear it as well. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 292 [topic] => 44 [informant] => LoveStruck_Hippie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Nostalgic )
Memories Melody

Contributed by LoveStruck_Hippie on Friday, 16th October 2009 @ 06:28:25 PM in AEST
Topic: Nostalgic



So … Blue, the color of my world

A Hushed, Unwritten Symphony

Cried a long and lonely heartfelt note

Reaching for a soul, Lost in the Sadness

Left drowning in the Darkness of Sorrow

Unanswered melody of forgiveness

Child’s Play to my demons

Heart Song left bleeding

Your Lustful Blade

Wields a Tempest Wake

A Legacy, Fashioned in Time

Through the Looking Glass, I dream

If Only for a Moment … Deliver Me

This Indifference Hurts, leaving me

Penned In, Security Undone

5 Senses Scream pleading for normality

Allowing me to Just Be

Breathless from the effort

Emotional Infidelity leaving my world’s song

Broken

A Hushed, Unwritten Symphony
So … Blue the color of my world


Peace
~Shannon Musser~

Addendum: There may be a rewrite coming soon in the form of a song … with any luck we will put it to music and be able to hear it as well.




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Re: Memories Melody (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 16th October 2009 @ 06:56:59 PM AEST
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Shannon,

I am glad you posted this tonight.
It is beautiful, I felt each word on so many levels. I have been trying to pick a favorite part but each bit of this melts my heart.

Love you sis

Shall

(hugs to jecks too!)


Re: Memories Melody (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Friday, 16th October 2009 @ 07:15:27 PM AEST
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A clever and accomplished arrangement, Shannon, and it shines with emotion and heart. Might try it myself!

Spike



Re: Memories Melody (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Friday, 16th October 2009 @ 07:50:53 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful!

Heidi


Re: Memories Melody (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 16th October 2009 @ 08:04:55 PM AEST
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Gret job and awesomly creative.
smiles, blessings,
emy


Re: Memories Melody (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 17th October 2009 @ 11:43:52 AM AEST
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OH sweetie, this was sensational!

What a wonderful way to incorporate all your titles!! This worked
so flowingly, you'd think they were separate words and phrases you
just came up with. :) Like they were written together, straight from
your beautiful heart. (And they were .. just not all at the once. )

Exceptional post hun. I don't think I'll be trying that ... too many
titles. :P *raises glass to your creativity*


*huge squeezies*

~ Breezy


Re: Memories Melody (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 07:27:38 AM AEST
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WooHooo!!!!
It turned out beautiful!
Very full of depth. I would never have thought it was filled with titles seeing it stand on its own.
The thanks is sweet, though I did very little.
Good luck with the song! I can't wait to hear it!




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