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Array ( [sid] => 154135 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mistakes [time] => 2009-10-16 08:19:42 [hometext] => I think, everyone understand what it's about.... [bodytext] => [She:]
Boy, I know, you're feelin' blue
Now that you see me with another one
Who could love me better than you
While it was for you just an empty sound.
I got the feelin' you've never known me
So you just let him take me away from you,
Don't you know, he says you've never deserved me
And I'm startin' to believe it's truth.

You couldn't keep me with you,
So I found someone who could,
I know it makes you burn
When you see us walking by
But this bridge already got burned
And I won't turn around,
I've learnt the lesson you'd given me,
There’s no good cryin’ over split milk

[He]
You might've thought I haven't loved you,
Never said that you mean the world,
You're sad, regretin' about the past, are you?
What’s the use of tellin’ now you were the one
Who’s got me feeling like the real man
As you were the one who stole my cool,
To let another man ride roughshod it over.
So how can you say that my love was never true?

Yes, I couldn't keep you with me,
So you have found someone who could,
And yes, it makes me burn
When I see you walkin' by with him,
And maybe, you're happy now, ain't you?
I know this bridge already got burnt
So you've learnt the lesson I'd given you,
But I ain’t learnt yet to live without you.

[She:] We both made a big mistakes,
[He:] One step away, and you're with someone else,
[She:] Do you think, I'm happy, when I see you alone,
[He:] You look happy now, the rest don't matter at all.

[She:]
You couldn't keep me with you,
So I found someone who could,
I know it makes you burn
When you see us walking by
But this bridge already got burned
And I won't turn around,
I've learnt the lesson you'd given me,
There’s no good cryin’ over split milk

[He:]
Yes, I couldn't keep you with me,
So you have found someone who could,
And yes, it makes me burn
When I see you walkin' by with him,
And maybe, you're happy now, ain't you?
I know this bridge already got burnt
So you've learnt the lesson I'd given you,
But I wasn't learnt yet to live without you.

[She & He:]
I've learnt the lesson you'd given me (given you)
But I haven't learnt yet to live without you

You couldn't keep me with you, (Baby, I know)
So I found someone who could, (He's not me)
I know it makes you burn (Oh yes, it hurts)
When you see us walking by (When I see you with him)
But this bridge already got burned (I lost you)
And I won't turn around, (baby, come back to me)
I've learnt the lesson you'd given me, (I'd given you)
There’s no good cryin’ over split milk (It’s over now)
Do you know, my love, I just can't, (Fix this mistake)
Cos I ain't learnt yet to live without you. (You know, I ain't too)
To live without you...
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Mistakes

Contributed by Alexa_Bachtel on Friday, 16th October 2009 @ 08:19:42 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



[She:]
Boy, I know, you're feelin' blue
Now that you see me with another one
Who could love me better than you
While it was for you just an empty sound.
I got the feelin' you've never known me
So you just let him take me away from you,
Don't you know, he says you've never deserved me
And I'm startin' to believe it's truth.

You couldn't keep me with you,
So I found someone who could,
I know it makes you burn
When you see us walking by
But this bridge already got burned
And I won't turn around,
I've learnt the lesson you'd given me,
There’s no good cryin’ over split milk

[He]
You might've thought I haven't loved you,
Never said that you mean the world,
You're sad, regretin' about the past, are you?
What’s the use of tellin’ now you were the one
Who’s got me feeling like the real man
As you were the one who stole my cool,
To let another man ride roughshod it over.
So how can you say that my love was never true?

Yes, I couldn't keep you with me,
So you have found someone who could,
And yes, it makes me burn
When I see you walkin' by with him,
And maybe, you're happy now, ain't you?
I know this bridge already got burnt
So you've learnt the lesson I'd given you,
But I ain’t learnt yet to live without you.

[She:] We both made a big mistakes,
[He:] One step away, and you're with someone else,
[She:] Do you think, I'm happy, when I see you alone,
[He:] You look happy now, the rest don't matter at all.

[She:]
You couldn't keep me with you,
So I found someone who could,
I know it makes you burn
When you see us walking by
But this bridge already got burned
And I won't turn around,
I've learnt the lesson you'd given me,
There’s no good cryin’ over split milk

[He:]
Yes, I couldn't keep you with me,
So you have found someone who could,
And yes, it makes me burn
When I see you walkin' by with him,
And maybe, you're happy now, ain't you?
I know this bridge already got burnt
So you've learnt the lesson I'd given you,
But I wasn't learnt yet to live without you.

[She & He:]
I've learnt the lesson you'd given me (given you)
But I haven't learnt yet to live without you

You couldn't keep me with you, (Baby, I know)
So I found someone who could, (He's not me)
I know it makes you burn (Oh yes, it hurts)
When you see us walking by (When I see you with him)
But this bridge already got burned (I lost you)
And I won't turn around, (baby, come back to me)
I've learnt the lesson you'd given me, (I'd given you)
There’s no good cryin’ over split milk (It’s over now)
Do you know, my love, I just can't, (Fix this mistake)
Cos I ain't learnt yet to live without you. (You know, I ain't too)
To live without you...




Copyright © Alexa_Bachtel ... [ 2009-10-16 08:19:42]
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Re: Mistakes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 16th October 2009 @ 10:16:01 AM AEST
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I did not like your poem, but it is really good.
lol...I'm being honest, that right there is really good, I guess it's just a difference of opinion that i dont like it
however, I must ask, is this a song you made? cuz you should have posted it as a song type ...not lost love =)
good work, creative


Re: Mistakes (User Rating: 1 )
by Alexa_Bachtel on Friday, 16th October 2009 @ 10:27:13 AM AEST
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Yeah, I'm writting lyrics for different singers. That's waht I do. But I believe that's the poetry too. In one sense... I don't judge you if you didn't like this poem. Many men, many minds




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