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2008-07-01 13:49:23
Two days

I can't fly,

so I have to wait.

I am still writing with my care and love,

and look out of the window once in a while,

I don't want to leave the room.

It is rainning outside,

the room is wet and hot,

but I still feel the weather is so beautiful in this hot summer,

sometimes I feel stoned,

for I have romantic notions about becoming a free bird.

I want to fly,

fly in the sky,

just like a bird,

flitter and flitter......

I want to fly,

fly in the sky,

just like a butterfly,

hitter and hitter......

for I believe soon the human beings can fly freely,

and can arrive to times in outer space safely,

I want to fly in every missing day,

I want to fly in every single night.

When night kisses the fading day,

I will whisper to your ear,

to tell you I will give you a fresh world.

There is always your busy figure,

I can see you withering up the time,

I worry about your health,

and wish you a relaxing afternoon.

Your figure remains me of the time when we were together,

I am still very excited now.

Pleasant hours fly past,

but I borrow your good idea,

I feel you are still staying here.

Now,

I think you left me again that night,

you told me you will return in two days,

but you were not yet sure if you can.

After you left,

I didn't feel lonely,

for I was sure your word.

Two days have simply flown by without any results,

I became a rover,

I have to wander in my mind.

But I start thinking of the another two days,

for I know the two days will be enough,

one will be used to thinking of myself,

the other will be used to thinking of you.

Let my thoughts come to you,

like the after glow of sunset at the margin of stary silence,

let my singing come to you,

it will send my love,

when the closing music fades out,

I will can see your smile again,

for I know it will take away your unrest.

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Two days

Contributed by holy on Thursday, 15th October 2009 @ 06:08:33 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Two days
2008-07-01 13:49:23
Two days

I can't fly,

so I have to wait.

I am still writing with my care and love,

and look out of the window once in a while,

I don't want to leave the room.

It is rainning outside,

the room is wet and hot,

but I still feel the weather is so beautiful in this hot summer,

sometimes I feel stoned,

for I have romantic notions about becoming a free bird.

I want to fly,

fly in the sky,

just like a bird,

flitter and flitter......

I want to fly,

fly in the sky,

just like a butterfly,

hitter and hitter......

for I believe soon the human beings can fly freely,

and can arrive to times in outer space safely,

I want to fly in every missing day,

I want to fly in every single night.

When night kisses the fading day,

I will whisper to your ear,

to tell you I will give you a fresh world.

There is always your busy figure,

I can see you withering up the time,

I worry about your health,

and wish you a relaxing afternoon.

Your figure remains me of the time when we were together,

I am still very excited now.

Pleasant hours fly past,

but I borrow your good idea,

I feel you are still staying here.

Now,

I think you left me again that night,

you told me you will return in two days,

but you were not yet sure if you can.

After you left,

I didn't feel lonely,

for I was sure your word.

Two days have simply flown by without any results,

I became a rover,

I have to wander in my mind.

But I start thinking of the another two days,

for I know the two days will be enough,

one will be used to thinking of myself,

the other will be used to thinking of you.

Let my thoughts come to you,

like the after glow of sunset at the margin of stary silence,

let my singing come to you,

it will send my love,

when the closing music fades out,

I will can see your smile again,

for I know it will take away your unrest.

Copyright © holy ... [ 2009-10-15 18:08:33]
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Re: Two days (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 15th October 2009 @ 09:21:33 PM AEST
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A flowing beautiful write.

Michelle

Re: Two days (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Saturday, 15th June 2019 @ 02:03:37 PM AEST
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Very sweet and flowing!

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nice work

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