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Array ( [sid] => 154051 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => today might die [time] => 2009-10-13 14:30:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Today might die
The only death
That life can ever see
The one I loved
Has fought and lost
For all of us to see
This girl was good
But not no more
She lies there with no lies
Her body will go to the hardest place
Her spirit softly flies
The day she died is the last time
That she would ever see
The one she loved and he loved back
And that person was just me
The love we had was just so strong
I cry over her grave
The day she died
Was the last time
That I had the chance to save
I no I didn’t tell her
That all the days I hid
I no that she barley liked me
These days I no I cried
But that didn’t stop me
From what I did all fill
I no that I did love her
And you know I love her still
The words unspoken
From the one I loved
That is gone from me right here
This is the last time I would have
To shed my very last tear. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 133 [topic] => 22 [informant] => CwisssStunnaaa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

today might die

Contributed by CwisssStunnaaa on Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 02:30:46 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Today might die
The only death
That life can ever see
The one I loved
Has fought and lost
For all of us to see
This girl was good
But not no more
She lies there with no lies
Her body will go to the hardest place
Her spirit softly flies
The day she died is the last time
That she would ever see
The one she loved and he loved back
And that person was just me
The love we had was just so strong
I cry over her grave
The day she died
Was the last time
That I had the chance to save
I no I didn’t tell her
That all the days I hid
I no that she barley liked me
These days I no I cried
But that didn’t stop me
From what I did all fill
I no that I did love her
And you know I love her still
The words unspoken
From the one I loved
That is gone from me right here
This is the last time I would have
To shed my very last tear.

Copyright Â© CwisssStunnaaa ... [ 2009-10-13 14:30:46]
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Re: today might die (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Sunday, 27th May 2018 @ 02:03:57 AM AEST
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Sad but beautifully written.

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