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Array ( [sid] => 154038 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bring my lover to my hometown [time] => 2009-10-13 06:28:38 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Bring my lover to my hometown
2008-06-25 00:07:54
Bring my lover to my hometown



Male: I will follow my lover to her hometown.

Female: Dear, dear, hurry up!

Male: Ah, I am coming!

Female: Dear, dear, hurry up!

Male: Ah, I am coming!



Female: I am going to my home in countryside.

Male: I am just like a tail behind you.

Female: When you meet my mom......

Male: I will call her my mother.

Female: When you meet my dad......

Male: I love you. I will call him my father.



Female: You towny don't be far too proud and conceited.

Male: What in the world are your parents hoping about their son-in-law?

Female: Haha, I should ask my parents about it again.

Male: Don't hesitate.

Female: Haha, I should ask my parents again.

Male: It is up to you, better get it settled today.



Male: What can I do in the village?

Female: Feel free to use your own ideas.

Male: Well, promote agriculture by applying scientific and technological advances.

Female: Ok, be far-sighted!

Male: Wow! I want you to be the bellwether.

Female: No, no, no! I will only be the housekeeper!



Female: My dearest in eyesglasses, are you ready?

Male: Tell me quickly when we can enter our bridal chamber!

Female: Look your excited espression!

Male: I am only too glad to go with you!

Female: Look your blissed look with joy!

Male: Haha, I am a bit weak at the knees, for I am so shy......



Female: Dear, dear, hurry up!

Male: Wow, I am coming!

Female: Dear, dear, hurry up!

Male: Wow, I am following!

Female:

Dear, hurry up!

follow me to my hometown quickly!

The scenery there is beautiful beyond expression,

there is a big and wide place for us to stay!



Male:

Well, hurry up!

I am following you there.

The wish of fully utilizing the natural resources will eventually come true,

I will pump money into the development of the new product.

Wow,

I will be a swain there......



Female(Male):

Hurry up! Hurry up!

Let us go happily with hand in hand,

to strive for a relatively comfortable life.

We will walk in the street shoulder to shoulder,

for we just catch the best part of our life.

Really,

we are happiest couple!















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Bring my lover to my hometown

Contributed by holy on Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 06:28:38 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Bring my lover to my hometown
2008-06-25 00:07:54
Bring my lover to my hometown



Male: I will follow my lover to her hometown.

Female: Dear, dear, hurry up!

Male: Ah, I am coming!

Female: Dear, dear, hurry up!

Male: Ah, I am coming!



Female: I am going to my home in countryside.

Male: I am just like a tail behind you.

Female: When you meet my mom......

Male: I will call her my mother.

Female: When you meet my dad......

Male: I love you. I will call him my father.



Female: You towny don't be far too proud and conceited.

Male: What in the world are your parents hoping about their son-in-law?

Female: Haha, I should ask my parents about it again.

Male: Don't hesitate.

Female: Haha, I should ask my parents again.

Male: It is up to you, better get it settled today.



Male: What can I do in the village?

Female: Feel free to use your own ideas.

Male: Well, promote agriculture by applying scientific and technological advances.

Female: Ok, be far-sighted!

Male: Wow! I want you to be the bellwether.

Female: No, no, no! I will only be the housekeeper!



Female: My dearest in eyesglasses, are you ready?

Male: Tell me quickly when we can enter our bridal chamber!

Female: Look your excited espression!

Male: I am only too glad to go with you!

Female: Look your blissed look with joy!

Male: Haha, I am a bit weak at the knees, for I am so shy......



Female: Dear, dear, hurry up!

Male: Wow, I am coming!

Female: Dear, dear, hurry up!

Male: Wow, I am following!

Female:

Dear, hurry up!

follow me to my hometown quickly!

The scenery there is beautiful beyond expression,

there is a big and wide place for us to stay!



Male:

Well, hurry up!

I am following you there.

The wish of fully utilizing the natural resources will eventually come true,

I will pump money into the development of the new product.

Wow,

I will be a swain there......



Female(Male):

Hurry up! Hurry up!

Let us go happily with hand in hand,

to strive for a relatively comfortable life.

We will walk in the street shoulder to shoulder,

for we just catch the best part of our life.

Really,

we are happiest couple!



















Copyright © holy ... [ 2009-10-13 06:28:38]
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Re: Bring my lover to my hometown (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 08:36:53 PM AEST
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I really like your series of diaries in a poetic format.

I am guessing English is a second language for you and that impresses me. Nicely down.

In your last line did you mean it to read:

we are the happiest couple!


?

Just curious.

Take care,

Tim

cool dude




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