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Array ( [sid] => 154003 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It is just an optical illusion [time] => 2009-10-12 00:44:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It is just an optical illusion
2008-06-22 23:22:14
It is just an optical illusion



Tonight,

I am just like the wind,

blowing to the heaven of illusion,

the sky is bespangled with stars,

the flying stars are just my cares,

I can see for miles from the top of the tower......



You had taken distance,

I pined away after you left.

I am missing you a lot,

I want to pass the rope,

and I hope you can take it......



I can see the tea plantations stretching far into the distance over the hills,

after such a long thirsty journey,

you should drink deep of the fresh spring water.

Don't make your horse run so fast on such a dark night,

to think further back into your childhood,

I wish you have a excellent night......



I miss you terribly!

I am sending you my warm affection and loving thought,

and wishing your days be bright with dreams come true and filled with favorite memories.

I linger on the thought of you,

I am sending you my lovely kiss,

the nice present I give you speak volumes for what I am thinking of you......



It is so long tonight,

but I don't want to stop my fly.

I am flying through a long and arduous journey,

I will finally get where you are staying,

I will stay with you.

Just so,

I know I have fallen so far behind you,

but I will never feel it seems pointless continuing......



Yes,

I am flying,

I know it is just an optical illusion,

it doesn't matter to me.

I am flying with my desire,

I feel you are waltzing me round so delicately,

I feel as if I was floating on air......



Can you hear my singing?

I sing beautifully,

it will delight you.

I am taking distance from home,

I will dance with you soon.

Yes,

it is just an optical illusion,

but I believe,

with your love and my affection,

we will build an impeccably happy life......







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It is just an optical illusion

Contributed by holy on Monday, 12th October 2009 @ 12:44:52 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



It is just an optical illusion
2008-06-22 23:22:14
It is just an optical illusion



Tonight,

I am just like the wind,

blowing to the heaven of illusion,

the sky is bespangled with stars,

the flying stars are just my cares,

I can see for miles from the top of the tower......



You had taken distance,

I pined away after you left.

I am missing you a lot,

I want to pass the rope,

and I hope you can take it......



I can see the tea plantations stretching far into the distance over the hills,

after such a long thirsty journey,

you should drink deep of the fresh spring water.

Don't make your horse run so fast on such a dark night,

to think further back into your childhood,

I wish you have a excellent night......



I miss you terribly!

I am sending you my warm affection and loving thought,

and wishing your days be bright with dreams come true and filled with favorite memories.

I linger on the thought of you,

I am sending you my lovely kiss,

the nice present I give you speak volumes for what I am thinking of you......



It is so long tonight,

but I don't want to stop my fly.

I am flying through a long and arduous journey,

I will finally get where you are staying,

I will stay with you.

Just so,

I know I have fallen so far behind you,

but I will never feel it seems pointless continuing......



Yes,

I am flying,

I know it is just an optical illusion,

it doesn't matter to me.

I am flying with my desire,

I feel you are waltzing me round so delicately,

I feel as if I was floating on air......



Can you hear my singing?

I sing beautifully,

it will delight you.

I am taking distance from home,

I will dance with you soon.

Yes,

it is just an optical illusion,

but I believe,

with your love and my affection,

we will build an impeccably happy life......











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Re: It is just an optical illusion (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Monday, 12th October 2009 @ 06:49:51 AM AEST
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What beautiful thoughts & words! Your message is so pure. Very lovely. elle :)


Re: It is just an optical illusion (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 12th October 2009 @ 11:51:07 PM AEST
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Another beautiful write.
smiles,
emy




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