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Array ( [sid] => 154001 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Perfect life [time] => 2009-10-12 00:42:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Perfect life
2008-06-20 14:19:06
Perfect life



"Are you ready?"

"Wait a minute......"

"Hurry up!"

"I am coming......"

"Don't lost hold of my hand, follow me, slowly!"

"Haha, ok, ok!"

"I mean to get to the top by sunrise."

"Well, here we are at last!"

"Look, How beautiful!"



Youthful years,

we liked to do something special,

for our hearts were full of sweet dreams.

Youthful years with chequered career,

our life was impetuous as the running water.....



I can still hear the running water,

I am keenly aware of the insaneness,

how wild the scenes its winding shores supply.

All the loneliness and happiness come to my mind too,

the views are we exchanged the final kiss before parting.

At this very moment,

it is running our wonderful time,

Maybe this is just our perfect life......



I open the window and look up the bright stars,

to taste, to feel, to smell, to enjoy, to chew.

From the craziness to taste the romance,

from the loneliness to feel quietness,

from the happiness to smell the freshness,

I feel really fresh with all of violent passions.

I am enjoying and chewing,

everything belong to us is always interesting......



We never ceased trying to measure up to our ideal,

our faces are the map of time.

As the years slipped by,

I thought less about many things,

but I can't forget every moment after meeting you,

for I love you.



Sometimes,

we had to plod wearily on the hill of our life,

sometimes,

we had to shamble home through the rain and snow,

but for us,

I think we will reap a rich harvest later in life.

Yes,

I hope we run all our way with a light graceful step,

I hope we keep smiling and enjoying ourself all the time......



Day after day,

we walk and sing,

we almost forget that we are beginning to get wrinkles round our eyes.

Year after year,

we work hard,

we never mind that we are getting tired and old for our perfect life.

On our way forward,

we are bound to run into twists and turns,

I hope can see your gorgeous smile always,

it will turn loosen my passions,

I hope you can hear my sweet songs always,

they will turn loosen your energies.......



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Perfect life

Contributed by holy on Monday, 12th October 2009 @ 12:42:23 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Perfect life
2008-06-20 14:19:06
Perfect life



"Are you ready?"

"Wait a minute......"

"Hurry up!"

"I am coming......"

"Don't lost hold of my hand, follow me, slowly!"

"Haha, ok, ok!"

"I mean to get to the top by sunrise."

"Well, here we are at last!"

"Look, How beautiful!"



Youthful years,

we liked to do something special,

for our hearts were full of sweet dreams.

Youthful years with chequered career,

our life was impetuous as the running water.....



I can still hear the running water,

I am keenly aware of the insaneness,

how wild the scenes its winding shores supply.

All the loneliness and happiness come to my mind too,

the views are we exchanged the final kiss before parting.

At this very moment,

it is running our wonderful time,

Maybe this is just our perfect life......



I open the window and look up the bright stars,

to taste, to feel, to smell, to enjoy, to chew.

From the craziness to taste the romance,

from the loneliness to feel quietness,

from the happiness to smell the freshness,

I feel really fresh with all of violent passions.

I am enjoying and chewing,

everything belong to us is always interesting......



We never ceased trying to measure up to our ideal,

our faces are the map of time.

As the years slipped by,

I thought less about many things,

but I can't forget every moment after meeting you,

for I love you.



Sometimes,

we had to plod wearily on the hill of our life,

sometimes,

we had to shamble home through the rain and snow,

but for us,

I think we will reap a rich harvest later in life.

Yes,

I hope we run all our way with a light graceful step,

I hope we keep smiling and enjoying ourself all the time......



Day after day,

we walk and sing,

we almost forget that we are beginning to get wrinkles round our eyes.

Year after year,

we work hard,

we never mind that we are getting tired and old for our perfect life.

On our way forward,

we are bound to run into twists and turns,

I hope can see your gorgeous smile always,

it will turn loosen my passions,

I hope you can hear my sweet songs always,

they will turn loosen your energies.......







Copyright © holy ... [ 2009-10-12 00:42:23]
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Re: Perfect life (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 12th October 2009 @ 11:10:14 PM AEST
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Wow, this is very enjoyable reading.
Awesome.
smiles,
emy


Re: Perfect life (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Saturday, 15th June 2019 @ 02:00:48 PM AEST
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I second emy……
Very nice!


Re: Perfect life (User Rating: 1 )
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Read it again............wonderful!




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