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Array ( [sid] => 153960 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I need you're acceptance [time] => 2009-10-10 16:55:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You push me and pull me and tear me apart
You twist all my words and in seconds break my heart

Ive tried to be all you wanted me to be
To have your acceptance will set my heart so free

One day you love me and want me around
The next you hate me and push me to the ground

I try to be your perfection but perfection i can never be
So i stand here and pray you accept me for me

I've sculpted your masterpiece on my delicate frame
But the fire in my heart you will never tame

I want to be yours , in my heart i always have been
but whether you want me is yet to be seen

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I need you're acceptance

Contributed by bubkin on Saturday, 10th October 2009 @ 04:55:44 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

You push me and pull me and tear me apart
You twist all my words and in seconds break my heart

Ive tried to be all you wanted me to be
To have your acceptance will set my heart so free

One day you love me and want me around
The next you hate me and push me to the ground

I try to be your perfection but perfection i can never be
So i stand here and pray you accept me for me

I've sculpted your masterpiece on my delicate frame
But the fire in my heart you will never tame

I want to be yours , in my heart i always have been
but whether you want me is yet to be seen

Copyright © bubkin ... [ 2009-10-10 16:55:44]
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Re: I need you're acceptance (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 10th October 2009 @ 11:02:44 PM AEST
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Very emotional and you conveyed it well.

There is also seems to be confusion in the person's mind. Perhaps she doesn't consciously realize that in this line:

Ive tried to be all you wanted me to be

but perhaps subconsciously knows it in this line:

So i stand here and pray you accept me for me

That is the best way to think about it, for trying to be everything we can be for someone, even things we're not, could be a mistake. People really should be themselves and others should accept them as they are.

This is a pleading and yearning poem....nicely done.

Take care

Tim
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Re: I need you're acceptance (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 11th October 2009 @ 05:52:51 AM AEST
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