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Array ( [sid] => 153947 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Hollow Glass Shell [time] => 2009-10-09 23:54:12 [hometext] => you won't look me in the eyes. [bodytext] => A hollow glass shell.
That's all that is left.
So cold, and lifeless, and fragile.

I know the shell well,
The texture, the smell,
How it felt to touch,
I miss it so much...

It hasn't always been hollow,
or empty or glass,
It once overflowed
With laughter and love,
A love destined to break,
A love that can't last.

It won't fix the problem,
And not that it matters,
But i think if it looked at me,
The glass shell would shatter.

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A Hollow Glass Shell

Contributed by anders on Friday, 9th October 2009 @ 11:54:12 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

A hollow glass shell.
That's all that is left.
So cold, and lifeless, and fragile.

I know the shell well,
The texture, the smell,
How it felt to touch,
I miss it so much...

It hasn't always been hollow,
or empty or glass,
It once overflowed
With laughter and love,
A love destined to break,
A love that can't last.

It won't fix the problem,
And not that it matters,
But i think if it looked at me,
The glass shell would shatter.

Copyright © anders ... [ 2009-10-09 23:54:12]
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Re: A Hollow Glass Shell (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyRose on Saturday, 10th October 2009 @ 08:37:33 AM AEST
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oh this is so sad and beautifully written........makes me think of how breakable love can be,so fragile if not taken care of........

Re: A Hollow Glass Shell (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 10th October 2009 @ 03:45:03 PM AEST
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Great image. The isea of a glass shell really gets across, as Lady Rose said, how fragile love is and how hollow it becomes when the passion drains away.

Nice job.

Re: A Hollow Glass Shell (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 06:14:13 AM AEST
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nicely writen, emotions felt, yes I agree love is fragile.
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