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Array ( [sid] => 153924 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I have made a worse plan [time] => 2009-10-08 23:09:48 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I have made a worse plan
2008-06-12 23:18:47
I have made a worse plan

I was silent for months,

finally my wishes have been realized,

I will be away from the factory today,

"Congratulations!

you will be very free."

After that terrible night,

The thing has shaken me up pretty badly.

Whenever I came from work,

I was alwasy tired.

I wanted to sleep early,

but I didn't sleep well all the night.

For the last few months,

I have been on a bed of thorns.

I always feel great concern for my carelessness.

I hope anything won't occur again.

Recently,

my mother often asked,

"Is it my imagination,

or have you lost a lot of weight?"

Indeed,

Whenever you came back,

I hoped I gave you my best,

but,

I was sure,

I didn't!

because I couldn't control my tears.

I wonder why,

I don't stop my tears.

whenever you were going to work,

I had no stomach for a cry,

but I did it before you,

it always made you feel upset......

It will be May Day the day after tomorrow,

you told me you will come back.

I am afraid if I will still cry in your arms,

but I will try my best

because I don't hope you feel bad.

If I still cry,

I have made a worse plan.......

Forgive me,

I have to keep the thing back,

I have to hide the story in the bottom of my heart,

because I don't hope you be worried about me and our son.

If you know it,

you can't keep your mind on work.

But for me,

I shan't be able to manage without your help.

I am really stumped,

I just don't know what to do......

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I have made a worse plan

Contributed by holy on Thursday, 8th October 2009 @ 11:09:48 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I have made a worse plan
2008-06-12 23:18:47
I have made a worse plan

I was silent for months,

finally my wishes have been realized,

I will be away from the factory today,

"Congratulations!

you will be very free."

After that terrible night,

The thing has shaken me up pretty badly.

Whenever I came from work,

I was alwasy tired.

I wanted to sleep early,

but I didn't sleep well all the night.

For the last few months,

I have been on a bed of thorns.

I always feel great concern for my carelessness.

I hope anything won't occur again.

Recently,

my mother often asked,

"Is it my imagination,

or have you lost a lot of weight?"

Indeed,

Whenever you came back,

I hoped I gave you my best,

but,

I was sure,

I didn't!

because I couldn't control my tears.

I wonder why,

I don't stop my tears.

whenever you were going to work,

I had no stomach for a cry,

but I did it before you,

it always made you feel upset......

It will be May Day the day after tomorrow,

you told me you will come back.

I am afraid if I will still cry in your arms,

but I will try my best

because I don't hope you feel bad.

If I still cry,

I have made a worse plan.......

Forgive me,

I have to keep the thing back,

I have to hide the story in the bottom of my heart,

because I don't hope you be worried about me and our son.

If you know it,

you can't keep your mind on work.

But for me,

I shan't be able to manage without your help.

I am really stumped,

I just don't know what to do......

Copyright © holy ... [ 2009-10-08 23:09:48]
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Re: I have made a worse plan (User Rating: 1 )
by redwest802 on Saturday, 11th August 2018 @ 04:07:05 AM AEST
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