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[aid] => mick
[title] => Prediction of a Paradox
[time] => 2009-10-07 14:09:43
[hometext] => I know, I know, I've been absent for a while. Here's what I've come up with. PS-- is it legal/ kosher to use haiku as stanzas like this? Criticism highly appreciated.
[bodytext] => Virgin Asen quakes its feeble roots stir and lift. Wind will spread its seed. Miles from where it grew, a feeble aspen tumbles-- roots heavy with soil. Capable Gard'ner watched an aspen crash nearby-- claims the damaged tree. Roots wind through new soil struggling and unfamiliar, satiated by rain. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 140 [topic] => 43 [informant] => liquidsunshine [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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