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Array ( [sid] => 153871 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => sweet lust [time] => 2009-10-06 19:09:48 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Why does he give us a thirst that cant be quenched
Does he take pleasure in our pain like a prison sentence
It would be so easy to give in to pleasure
A release from the pain, the never ending thirst
Would it be so wrong
The seduction so sweet so strong makes you feel whole there’s nothing wrong
But that would be wrong to get what you want
It would make you feel less in his eyes
To upset the balance of your life just for one night
So you try to cheat not quite the full retreat
But you tell yourself its almost a sweet
Leaves you feeling raw unfinished left in a ditch wondering if its some sort of glitch
Gasping in disbelief as the pain of reality seeps in
Why did you go where he told you not to
As you try to remember why you crossed the line you still have to go on and pretend to be whole
Those you loved seem so distant now
The sick feeling of disappointment you don’t want them to see what you have don’t to your soul
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sweet lust

Contributed by ladybird95 on Tuesday, 6th October 2009 @ 07:09:48 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Why does he give us a thirst that cant be quenched
Does he take pleasure in our pain like a prison sentence
It would be so easy to give in to pleasure
A release from the pain, the never ending thirst
Would it be so wrong
The seduction so sweet so strong makes you feel whole there’s nothing wrong
But that would be wrong to get what you want
It would make you feel less in his eyes
To upset the balance of your life just for one night
So you try to cheat not quite the full retreat
But you tell yourself its almost a sweet
Leaves you feeling raw unfinished left in a ditch wondering if its some sort of glitch
Gasping in disbelief as the pain of reality seeps in
Why did you go where he told you not to
As you try to remember why you crossed the line you still have to go on and pretend to be whole
Those you loved seem so distant now
The sick feeling of disappointment you don’t want them to see what you have don’t to your soul

Copyright Â© ladybird95 ... [ 2009-10-06 19:09:48]
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Re: sweet lust (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 03:15:34 AM AEST
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Hi,

Raw temptation! Aren't we all susceptible?

Well scribed.

Tommy

Re: sweet lust (User Rating: 1 )
by thedarkestsheep on Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 04:49:39 AM AEST
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your thoughts sound so familiar to me
but settled far in the past
now i abandon myself to the sweet lust
there's nothing bad about it

nice one ;)

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