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Array ( [sid] => 153846 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Real Enough [time] => 2009-10-05 20:14:08 [hometext] => ....the pain of losing him ......real enough......the pain of having it slip through your fingers.....real enough.....wrtten in '08 [bodytext] => How did I
fall
so fast
ever
so deeply....

When had
the die
been
cast
oh so
neatly...

How did
my fortune
suddenly
amass
silently...
discreetly....

When had
my happiness
become so
vast
hurting me
sweetly....

How did I
ever earn
freedom from
the past
sanity gripped
so
fiercely....

When had
you appeared
from my
dreams...
I'm aghast....
erasing the
nightmares
fleetingly...

How or when
are simply
the questioning
rambling
semantics
of a broken
spirit in
a reality
where you
unfettered
a
leaden
soul.....
secured a
distrustful
heart...
retrieved her
stolen sanity...
and unchained
the siren
to once
again
to feel safe
enough
to finally
rest in
the arms
of a man
who loves
all of her....

So achingly
real

real enough
to finally
breathe....

real enough
to seek
the path
out of her forest...

real enough
to venture
through the
open meadow...

Real enough
to love
you back.....











[comments] => 2 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 48 [informant] => jaeann [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Real Enough

Contributed by jaeann on Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 08:14:08 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



How did I
fall
so fast
ever
so deeply....

When had
the die
been
cast
oh so
neatly...

How did
my fortune
suddenly
amass
silently...
discreetly....

When had
my happiness
become so
vast
hurting me
sweetly....

How did I
ever earn
freedom from
the past
sanity gripped
so
fiercely....

When had
you appeared
from my
dreams...
I'm aghast....
erasing the
nightmares
fleetingly...

How or when
are simply
the questioning
rambling
semantics
of a broken
spirit in
a reality
where you
unfettered
a
leaden
soul.....
secured a
distrustful
heart...
retrieved her
stolen sanity...
and unchained
the siren
to once
again
to feel safe
enough
to finally
rest in
the arms
of a man
who loves
all of her....

So achingly
real

real enough
to finally
breathe....

real enough
to seek
the path
out of her forest...

real enough
to venture
through the
open meadow...

Real enough
to love
you back.....















Copyright © jaeann ... [ 2009-10-05 20:14:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Real Enough (User Rating: 1 )
by picklepuss on Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 11:58:53 PM AEST
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Wow! I am moved with emotion at your pairing of words and phrases. You have pulled deeply from your heart and shared your passion. Love on! Keep writing!


Re: Real Enough (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 6th October 2009 @ 08:00:59 AM AEST
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Your heart sang throughout this beautiful poem. It is super. Good work here.
I also loved the style format, it carries itself.

Michelle




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