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For a moment I shall find myself
lost
lost in this moment.
lost
within the confines of my heart
lost
beside the embers of my soul
lost
within the multi shades of love

Like the tiny granules
of sand shifting
time stands still
for no one
love is easily taken forgranted
lost within the confines of life.

For now I shall be lost
lost in the circle of loving you.

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Lost in this moment

Contributed by shelby on Wednesday, 30th September 2009 @ 08:11:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

"Love is like an hourglass, with the heart filling up as the brain empties." Jule Renard

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For a moment I shall find myself
lost
lost in this moment.
lost
within the confines of my heart
lost
beside the embers of my soul
lost
within the multi shades of love

Like the tiny granules
of sand shifting
time stands still
for no one
love is easily taken forgranted
lost within the confines of life.

For now I shall be lost
lost in the circle of loving you.

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2009-09-30 20:11:00]
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Re: Lost in this moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 30th September 2009 @ 08:32:05 PM AEST
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Beautiful and excellent, my dear. Mean that. Nuther one of those that I wish I had written.

Re: Lost in this moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on Wednesday, 30th September 2009 @ 11:33:40 PM AEST
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I love it, keep it up:)

Re: Lost in this moment (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Thursday, 1st October 2009 @ 02:34:15 PM AEST
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Hi shel,

A well written affirmation of love and devotion.
A beautiful choice of words.

Tommy

Re: Lost in this moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd October 2009 @ 09:22:13 AM AEST
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Oh Shel, this is so amazing. Such a soft and delicate approach and what
a concept (the hourglass quote- Brilliant!)! Being lost in this way makes one
almost never want to be 'found'. Is anything as euphoric as the breath of
love? Perhaps this piece. ^_^

Beautiful and magical hun. A true work of breathtaking art.

*hugs*

~ Breezy

Re: Lost in this moment (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 3rd October 2009 @ 01:44:55 AM AEST
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Beautiful moment.
I remember a moment or two like this.
Awesome.
big huggs, luv, blessings,
emy

Re: Lost in this moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 02:57:04 PM AEST
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For now I shall be lost
lost in the circle of loving you.

I can think of many worse places to be lost.

Maybe other people can take love for granted. I never could. I never will.

A very sensitive write. Enjoyed it a lot.

Re: Lost in this moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Loende on Thursday, 5th November 2009 @ 06:32:31 PM AEST
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Sweetie...this just sang to me...and made me cry.

xo
~d

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