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Array ( [sid] => 153554 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Are All I See [time] => 2009-09-23 01:54:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It's starting to seem as though
Fate's playing a joke on me
I hardly see you anymore
But you are all I see

A phone call after lunch
The speaker shares your name
He also shares your accent
Is someone playing games?
I force myself to speak
As I am thrown off guard
I pull myself together
But the shock still hits me hard

As I'm waiting for the train
I happen to glance round
I lock eyes with your double
My mouth drops to the ground
My heart; it skips a beat
My lungs take no more air
Until reality hits
That it's not you standing there

Later, whilst reading a book
There's a beacon of light
I see your name down in print
And it draws my eyesight
I stare blankly at it
As the other words dim
I force myself to move on
No. I should not think of him

Yes, time has continued passing
And it's a riddle to me
Its been ages since I've seen you
But you are all I see [comments] => 1 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 22 [informant] => jessb3 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

You Are All I See

Contributed by jessb3 on Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 01:54:12 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

It's starting to seem as though
Fate's playing a joke on me
I hardly see you anymore
But you are all I see

A phone call after lunch
The speaker shares your name
He also shares your accent
Is someone playing games?
I force myself to speak
As I am thrown off guard
I pull myself together
But the shock still hits me hard

As I'm waiting for the train
I happen to glance round
I lock eyes with your double
My mouth drops to the ground
My heart; it skips a beat
My lungs take no more air
Until reality hits
That it's not you standing there

Later, whilst reading a book
There's a beacon of light
I see your name down in print
And it draws my eyesight
I stare blankly at it
As the other words dim
I force myself to move on
No. I should not think of him

Yes, time has continued passing
And it's a riddle to me
Its been ages since I've seen you
But you are all I see

Copyright © jessb3 ... [ 2009-09-23 01:54:12]
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Re: You Are All I See (User Rating: 1 )
by SaaraBlack on Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 06:01:39 AM AEST
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Ohh..this is so good.I can really connect to it.Great job

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