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Tonight they saw…
Not Ordinary, first of all…
Love affair, drawn in calm air

Up on the hill,
By the old water mill.
Rolling the dice; like gods will,
Letting this southern romance spill…

Soft spoken, locked eyes
Intertwined, with long sighs..
Pushin you against the car,
Lonely, no no, by far...

Moon shines upon me and you.
No mortal can turn back time.
Tasting the soul on the dew,
Our body’s, silhouette mimes

Taking a page from Robert frost
All time is lost.
Pursue and follow through,
to loves beautiful view.
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Southern View

Contributed by recyclebin on Tuesday, 22nd September 2009 @ 09:15:16 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Under the Gods we share,
Tonight they saw…
Not Ordinary, first of all…
Love affair, drawn in calm air

Up on the hill,
By the old water mill.
Rolling the dice; like gods will,
Letting this southern romance spill…

Soft spoken, locked eyes
Intertwined, with long sighs..
Pushin you against the car,
Lonely, no no, by far...

Moon shines upon me and you.
No mortal can turn back time.
Tasting the soul on the dew,
Our body’s, silhouette mimes

Taking a page from Robert frost
All time is lost.
Pursue and follow through,
to loves beautiful view.

Copyright Â© recyclebin ... [ 2009-09-22 21:15:16]
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Re: Southern View (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 22nd September 2009 @ 10:18:11 PM AEST
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Beautifull, intriging write.
Huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy

Re: Southern View (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 03:50:51 AM AEST
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Yes, I like this. Love the way you chopped and
changed the rhyme sequence without
compromising the soul of the poem.

Well done!

Tommy

Re: Southern View (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th September 2009 @ 07:25:33 AM AEST
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Oh bin, how utterly exquisite!

There is so much in this for the soul to feast upon. And how vividly
you've drawn the picture for us. This is entirely sigh inducing. These
are the moments that we all live for. And I am GREEDY for them. I just
want every one of those stolen moments I can get. Thank you for
allowing me a glimpse into one of yours. ^_^ It is so amazingly beautiful.

~ Breezy

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