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Array ( [sid] => 153529 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Stop your act live your life [time] => 2009-09-22 15:35:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You say you want to die
But you never go through
You just want people to notice you
All that is left is scars

We worry for you
But what will you do
When the act gets old
When our blood runs cold

We stop trying to care
You're just going to pretend we're not there
Cut away soon there will but one thing you have left
I'm tired of you saying your miserable and depressed

Toughen up my friend
You got me and others until the end
But stop the act
Face your own facts

You have it great
And yet you cut away
Ignoring what we shout what later we say
You're going to be left alone

Only with your scars
To keep you company
What will do when I'm not there
At the door to stop you from taking it to far
What will you do when we stop to care

Stop your act live your life [comments] => 2 [counter] => 419 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Voice of the Silent [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Stop your act live your life

Contributed by Voice of the Silent on Tuesday, 22nd September 2009 @ 03:35:18 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



You say you want to die
But you never go through
You just want people to notice you
All that is left is scars

We worry for you
But what will you do
When the act gets old
When our blood runs cold

We stop trying to care
You're just going to pretend we're not there
Cut away soon there will but one thing you have left
I'm tired of you saying your miserable and depressed

Toughen up my friend
You got me and others until the end
But stop the act
Face your own facts

You have it great
And yet you cut away
Ignoring what we shout what later we say
You're going to be left alone

Only with your scars
To keep you company
What will do when I'm not there
At the door to stop you from taking it to far
What will you do when we stop to care

Stop your act live your life




Copyright © Voice of the Silent ... [ 2009-09-22 15:35:18]
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Re: Stop your act live your life (User Rating: 1 )
by sschuman on Friday, 25th September 2009 @ 10:14:56 AM AEST
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This was good. I can really relate and you really got your feelings across.


Re: Stop your act live your life (User Rating: 1 )
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