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Array ( [sid] => 153434 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The heart [time] => 2009-09-20 04:25:38 [hometext] => [bodytext] => the melody of the heart plays recklessly
without any strings to attach it to.
no instrument plays the melody
just natural lyrics playing.
the heart knows no end.
it will take you places
even if not wanted.
it will grow bigger in love
and more and more soft.
the heart creates poetry by itself
writing it on the apex
with blood,which gives life
and storing it safe.
always remembered and never forgotten.
the heart also will harden if pain persists to break it.
in defense the heart will fight back
some hearts refuse to fight
some just die.......
no pulse,no heart rate,no blood
A dead heart
one without emotion,
one traumatized.
life had its way with it.
those hearts need tender loving care.
and needs a heart that will always be there.
I donate my heart for such hearts
I am here.
one heart speaking to another.
lets write poetry on each other's hearts
and live life with emotion.
so we can store these words safe....
......in such a beautiful place.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 54 [informant] => LadyRose [notes] => Corrected spelling as requested Moderator_18 September 20, 2009 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => happypoetry )

The heart

Contributed by LadyRose on Sunday, 20th September 2009 @ 04:25:38 AM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

the melody of the heart plays recklessly
without any strings to attach it to.
no instrument plays the melody
just natural lyrics playing.
the heart knows no end.
it will take you places
even if not wanted.
it will grow bigger in love
and more and more soft.
the heart creates poetry by itself
writing it on the apex
with blood,which gives life
and storing it safe.
always remembered and never forgotten.
the heart also will harden if pain persists to break it.
in defense the heart will fight back
some hearts refuse to fight
some just die.......
no pulse,no heart rate,no blood
A dead heart
one without emotion,
one traumatized.
life had its way with it.
those hearts need tender loving care.
and needs a heart that will always be there.
I donate my heart for such hearts
I am here.
one heart speaking to another.
lets write poetry on each other's hearts
and live life with emotion.
so we can store these words safe....
......in such a beautiful place.

Copyright © LadyRose ... [ 2009-09-20 04:25:38]
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Re: The heart (User Rating: 1 )
by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on Monday, 21st September 2009 @ 05:21:17 AM AEST
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Nice structure but somehow the words left me a little confused. Not certain that it belongs in happy poetry unless I'm missing something. Nevertheless, well written.

Re: The heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 21st September 2009 @ 11:42:37 AM AEST
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I have to admit, I am impulsive and I sometimes react impulsively. Then there are times, I'll think before I put my foot in my mouth. :-)

So, with that said, my initial impulsive response to this was "Okay". :-) (As in a response to):

lets write poetry on each other's hearts
and live life with emotion.
so we can store these words safe....
......in such a beautiful place.

Anyway, this is a very profound poem with an oh so true story. Beautifully sad in places because of the truth it tells of about hearts dying and inspirational with the offer of "hey I'm here."

Basically, I know what you are writing about.

Take care,

Tim

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