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His once normal and untarnished life.
Right before his eyes, is slowly turning into an undying nightmare.
All thoughts that were once clear and incomplex.
Are now turning into a whirlwind of suicidal temptations.
This boy has lost his way, everything that was once a reality.
Is now just a fantasy, all confidence is lost in a vortex of lost hope.
As days pass by, his last glimpse of ambition is slowly devoured by the judge and the jury.
He is overlooked by all, fooling everybody with his cold exterior shell.
Society being too shallow to dive deep to shine through the darkness he has been plagued with , to stop him from making the biggest mistake of his young life.
This boy is waiting for somebody to wake him from his everlasting nightmare.
The savior he is urgent need of, the one person who will eliminate all the dreadful things that ruined him.
It seems everybody neglects him, nobody cares enough to save the boy from his biggest threat,
Himself.

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Nightmare

Contributed by Tarnished on Friday, 18th September 2009 @ 10:14:42 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

As he gradually regains consciousness , his mind awakens in a deep fog of twisted thoughts.
His once normal and untarnished life.
Right before his eyes, is slowly turning into an undying nightmare.
All thoughts that were once clear and incomplex.
Are now turning into a whirlwind of suicidal temptations.
This boy has lost his way, everything that was once a reality.
Is now just a fantasy, all confidence is lost in a vortex of lost hope.
As days pass by, his last glimpse of ambition is slowly devoured by the judge and the jury.
He is overlooked by all, fooling everybody with his cold exterior shell.
Society being too shallow to dive deep to shine through the darkness he has been plagued with , to stop him from making the biggest mistake of his young life.
This boy is waiting for somebody to wake him from his everlasting nightmare.
The savior he is urgent need of, the one person who will eliminate all the dreadful things that ruined him.
It seems everybody neglects him, nobody cares enough to save the boy from his biggest threat,
Himself.

Copyright © Tarnished ... [ 2009-09-18 22:14:42]
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Re: Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 18th September 2009 @ 11:24:03 PM AEST
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Well written but so darn sad.

Hugs
Michelle

Re: Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by TsunamiWaverider on Saturday, 19th September 2009 @ 01:00:59 AM AEST
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If that's an autobiographical poem, you need to speak to someone about it. Go see your local GP and get yourself checked out...especially your thyroid, then ask for a referral to see a psychiatrist/psychoanalyist.
Depression is an illness...but it CAN be managed.
Btw...if you are like me, you will hate knowing there is a flaw in your poem as they take so long to type out, but i think you omitted a word:
"The savior he is (*) urgent need of" (in)?
Cheers dude.

P.S. Illigitime non carborundum! [Don't let the bastards grind you down!]

Re: Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by musicrox13 on Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 07:23:03 PM AEST
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Wicked! loved it! keep writing!!!

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