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Array ( [sid] => 153331 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Polar Bear [time] => 2009-09-16 21:10:14 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My dark coal eyes,
Stars gleaming,
Make a star materialize.
The aura borealis
In the far distance.
Gives the horizon
An ember of subsistence.
The feeling of ice
The feeling so nice.
The feeling of ice
So nice.
I’m falling
The frigid arctic air,
Feels so cool.
This barren wasteland
Is our paradise jewel.
I’m a carnivore
I’m the polar bear.
Here I am
Feeling the ice
The feeling so nice
The feeling of ice
So nice.
We have roamed
Forever and a day
Now my homeland
Is melting away.
The ice that was so nice
Is breaking piece by piece
My joy, the heart
Breaking, piece by piece.
These dark coal eyes
Bare frozen tears.
Our numbers dwindle
In this new global frontier.
I’m at war,
In this human home.
A carnivore
I’m the polar bear………..
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The Polar Bear

Contributed by recyclebin on Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 09:10:14 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

My dark coal eyes,
Stars gleaming,
Make a star materialize.
The aura borealis
In the far distance.
Gives the horizon
An ember of subsistence.
The feeling of ice
The feeling so nice.
The feeling of ice
So nice.
I’m falling
The frigid arctic air,
Feels so cool.
This barren wasteland
Is our paradise jewel.
I’m a carnivore
I’m the polar bear.
Here I am
Feeling the ice
The feeling so nice
The feeling of ice
So nice.
We have roamed
Forever and a day
Now my homeland
Is melting away.
The ice that was so nice
Is breaking piece by piece
My joy, the heart
Breaking, piece by piece.
These dark coal eyes
Bare frozen tears.
Our numbers dwindle
In this new global frontier.
I’m at war,
In this human home.
A carnivore
I’m the polar bear………..

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Re: The Polar Bear (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 09:18:24 PM AEST
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Very touching write, my friend.
Sad but a masterpeice.
Huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: The Polar Bear (User Rating: 1 )
by TsunamiWaverider on Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 09:38:08 PM AEST
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I'm not much in to non-rhyming poetry as i believe it is far too easy to put down random thoughts and disguise it as 'poetry'.....but i know what i like - and THAT i liked.
Well done!

Re: The Polar Bear (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th September 2009 @ 12:56:39 AM AEST
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I thought you were Bin, but okay. ;-)

Anyway, I like that you could write from the bear's perspective and even though he (the bear) is in a serious plight, he was still well enough to grace us with his poem. Nice imagery.

Try staying a while next time, dude.

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