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Array ( [sid] => 153308 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mountain Climbing [time] => 2009-09-16 10:13:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Through the mist
up the winding road
to the mountain high
I did climb

Eager I walk
over stones and dust
higher and higher
lost in my mind

Legs aching
from the assent
Chest rising and falling
Tis not easy I find

Breathless
Reaching for the sky
Searching the blue
Clouds cover eyes blind

Stumbling now
Stones loose
Muscles grow numb
Tackling the incline

Apex reached
Breathless fascination
The world beneath me
Conquered...now mine

9/09
Laura Howell Horner [comments] => 6 [counter] => 7475 [topic] => 19 [informant] => deadheadpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

Mountain Climbing

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 10:13:56 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Through the mist
up the winding road
to the mountain high
I did climb

Eager I walk
over stones and dust
higher and higher
lost in my mind

Legs aching
from the assent
Chest rising and falling
Tis not easy I find

Breathless
Reaching for the sky
Searching the blue
Clouds cover eyes blind

Stumbling now
Stones loose
Muscles grow numb
Tackling the incline

Apex reached
Breathless fascination
The world beneath me
Conquered...now mine

9/09
Laura Howell Horner

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Re: Mountain Climbing (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 03:39:33 PM AEST
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Oh sweets it is so grand to know that you are still writing and now to
have you post this -- I'm just beside myself with happiness. :)

What a wonderful metaphor and it is beautifully positive. I adore the
idea within this. I was right there with you climbing and running out of breath
the higher we went. But perching on that summit is so glorious is it not?

The emotion in this is overwhelming, hun. And I LOVE it!!

*hugs you*

~ MG

Re: Mountain Climbing (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 04:15:44 PM AEST
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(((((((((((((((((((( Laurabeam ))))))))))))))))))))

bout time you got back here!!!

I really like this mountain (except I'm a little out of breath now), this poem, and the attitude.

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Re: Mountain Climbing (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 07:47:00 PM AEST
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Well girl,
I'm so happy you made it to the top of that mountain and then finnaly got back to us.
I've truly missed you so much. Now it's home again since you're back.
luv ya, huggs, smiles, blessings,
emy

Re: Mountain Climbing (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 17th September 2009 @ 05:53:54 AM AEST
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great write, i've missed your poems,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Mountain Climbing (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 18th September 2009 @ 01:33:23 PM AEST
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Yey! There is my sis!
I loved this poem! I was climbing with you, but of course you left me in the dust hee hee.

Really....... I am so happy you are posting, I loved the feeling I got while reading this.

Hugs you tight
Michelle

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