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Array ( [sid] => 153307 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => you are the fool [time] => 2009-09-16 10:11:43 [hometext] => .......one of the people I trusted my live with all of a sudden made me realise that she is not the friend she wants everyone else to think she is........ [bodytext] => thorns cutting into flesh
a child left in a forest
one car crashing into another
.....killing all that was in it......

thats how you make me feel,my friend
you can stop ignoring me
you got what you wanted
.......I am hurt..........

and we no longer are
.....friends.......
I see that you are playing sick games
you wont break me
I know it all,
so stop it
......you are the fool.
you are vendictive and cruel
befriending me just to tear me apart?
dont you know not even a war
can kill this heart.........

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you are the fool

Contributed by LadyRose on Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 10:11:43 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

thorns cutting into flesh
a child left in a forest
one car crashing into another
.....killing all that was in it......

thats how you make me feel,my friend
you can stop ignoring me
you got what you wanted
.......I am hurt..........

and we no longer are
.....friends.......
I see that you are playing sick games
you wont break me
I know it all,
so stop it
......you are the fool.
you are vendictive and cruel
befriending me just to tear me apart?
dont you know not even a war
can kill this heart.........

Copyright © LadyRose ... [ 2009-09-16 10:11:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: you are the fool (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 03:26:29 PM AEST
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This is a very heart wrenching poem. I hope you realize that you are better than her!

Re: you are the fool (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 17th September 2009 @ 06:28:54 AM AEST
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i had this happen to me too, someone i knew for years and believed a friend, you are better off without this person, after some time you will feel better, great write,

hugs n' love nessa

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