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Array ( [sid] => 153306 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Swallowed Up in This [time] => 2009-09-16 09:48:32 [hometext] => For a friend..... [bodytext] => Just a comment left on a note
Simply a few words
Never thought you'd respond

An invite into your world
A piece of you
you were so kind to share

I'll admit your fascination
and your enthusiasm
piqued my interest

With a photograph
One tiny moment of
you captured in time

Stirred something
A need to know you
A vibe we could not deny

Just a fantasy baby
Miles and miles away
Swallowed up in this.

9/09
Laura Howell Horner [comments] => 5 [counter] => 616 [topic] => 20 [informant] => deadheadpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 24 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InternetLove )

Swallowed Up in This

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 09:48:32 AM in AEST
Topic: InternetLove

Just a comment left on a note
Simply a few words
Never thought you'd respond

An invite into your world
A piece of you
you were so kind to share

I'll admit your fascination
and your enthusiasm
piqued my interest

With a photograph
One tiny moment of
you captured in time

Stirred something
A need to know you
A vibe we could not deny

Just a fantasy baby
Miles and miles away
Swallowed up in this.

9/09
Laura Howell Horner

Copyright Â© deadheadpoet ... [ 2009-09-16 09:48:32]
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Re: Swallowed Up in This (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 03:33:17 PM AEST
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omigosh DH!!! It's so great to see you here and with a new piece.

this is incredible. And it is so close to my own heart. Love this. Words
and sentiments and everything that is in between the lines. Just damn
wonderful. :)

You have no idea how happy it is to see your name on the homepage.

Take care, sweetie

~ MG

Re: Swallowed Up in This (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 04:18:54 PM AEST
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Yup, can sure relate. Not sure I wanna go there ever again, but definitely can understrand.

Nicely done, Laurabeam.

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Re: Swallowed Up in This (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 08:01:57 PM AEST
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I hear ya girl.
Again welcome home.
big huggs,
emy
Good work.

Re: Swallowed Up in This (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 17th September 2009 @ 06:46:37 AM AEST
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breathing reality,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Swallowed Up in This (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 18th September 2009 @ 01:38:36 PM AEST
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Isn"t that the best feeling when there is that instant connection?

I love this write sis! You always rock the house girl!

Hugs

Michelle

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