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Array ( [sid] => 15328 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Why Won't You Die! [time] => 2003-03-31 15:25:00 [hometext] => This is about my ex wife, everything in this poem really happend.

The Phantom [bodytext] => Why won't you die, our love died in 95,
You were the past, your the reason I wear this mask,
You said you were my lucky star,
Then you had sex with my best friend in the back seat of my car,

You said you loved me, then everyday you did something to destroy me,
Slow and steady, you ripped apart my soul, the worst thing is you enjoyed it though,
The look in your eyes, gave away every lie,
I gave you my heart, but you laughed as you tore it apart,

Everynight I cried, at times wishing I could die,
But thats, too good for you, I'd ***** on your casket at your funeral,
You took my money, you gave it to your boyfriend, so you could be his honey,
You'd have sex with them, then come and tell me what you did,

And everytime I forgave you, and told myself you'd be true,
The nights I slept alone, cause you were at the clubs, not at home,
Remember the night you beat me up, I didn't fight back cause I loved you too much,
The time I spent behind bars, cause you were speeding in a car,

But I didn't say anything, cause I couldn't bare to see you in chains,
So many times I wanted to put a gun to my head and blow out my brains,
But something kept telling me no, that I'd be better off alone,
Your not worth the tears I cried, now your memory will die.

Forever Faithful
The Phantom [comments] => 7 [counter] => 293 [topic] => 6 [informant] => The_Phantom [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Why Won't You Die!

Contributed by The_Phantom on Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 03:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Why won't you die, our love died in 95,
You were the past, your the reason I wear this mask,
You said you were my lucky star,
Then you had sex with my best friend in the back seat of my car,

You said you loved me, then everyday you did something to destroy me,
Slow and steady, you ripped apart my soul, the worst thing is you enjoyed it though,
The look in your eyes, gave away every lie,
I gave you my heart, but you laughed as you tore it apart,

Everynight I cried, at times wishing I could die,
But thats, too good for you, I'd ***** on your casket at your funeral,
You took my money, you gave it to your boyfriend, so you could be his honey,
You'd have sex with them, then come and tell me what you did,

And everytime I forgave you, and told myself you'd be true,
The nights I slept alone, cause you were at the clubs, not at home,
Remember the night you beat me up, I didn't fight back cause I loved you too much,
The time I spent behind bars, cause you were speeding in a car,

But I didn't say anything, cause I couldn't bare to see you in chains,
So many times I wanted to put a gun to my head and blow out my brains,
But something kept telling me no, that I'd be better off alone,
Your not worth the tears I cried, now your memory will die.

Forever Faithful
The Phantom




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Re: Why Won't You Die! (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 03:47:34 PM AEST
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Wow, Phantom... you really let it out here, yet you do it tastefully and respectfuuly. Isn't it disgusting when we give our hearts and souls to someone, and they rip it apart with a smirk right in front of our eyes? I feel you on this one, Phantom, and my heart goes out to you for being strong enough to show that you really cared enough to put up with such abuse. What a great poem, you describe yourself well and flow well also. A+


Re: Why Won't You Die! (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 03:47:40 PM AEST
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This is karoody. I liked this write, full of emotion and honesty. That's a lot to go through. Good thing she's an ex-


Re: Why Won't You Die! (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 04:29:12 PM AEST
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wow! great write! *wonders if she would melt like the witch in the wizard of oz?* justa thought, *gets bucket of water* hugs nessa


Re: Why Won't You Die! (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 05:32:34 PM AEST
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My husband really would enjoy this one for he has an Ex wife he feels the same about!
Really a great write! I'll have to show him this! Christina


Re: Why Won't You Die! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 05:56:17 AM AEST
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Great write!! I have an ex that I feel this way about. I can see where you are coming from.

sleepless_siren


Re: Why Won't You Die! (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 10:15:33 AM AEST
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I'm sorry all of these things happened too you. Life will be better now she's gone. This is a great write.
X's suck!! I wish I had a button, all we would have to do is push it and poof!! All gone!! LOL
Michelle


Re: Why Won't You Die! (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Thursday, 30th November 2006 @ 11:39:09 PM AEST
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wow again
im not as good of a poet as you
so i could only tell you how good and deep your poems are




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