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Array ( [sid] => 153273 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => SECRETS OF THE HEART [time] => 2009-09-15 19:04:13 [hometext] => Please critique and rate my poem..........even negative feedback is better than no feedback at all. [bodytext] =>
I wish that i could tell you
of all the things i feel,
all the feelings trapped inside
my heart cannot reveal.
It's not enough to tell you
that you're always on my mind,
you need to know you're everything
i've tried so hard to find.

You're the ray of sunshine
on my bleak and dismal day,
and thoughts of you help to keep
my lonliness at bay.
You're the friend who's always there
the one who makes me smile,
your charm can melt the coldest heart
your witching eyes beguile.

You're the one i'd love to love
the one whom i desire,
the one who makes my heartbeat race
and sets my heart on fire.
You're the first thing that i think of
each morning when i wake,
and with each and every breath i breathe
with thoughts of you i ache.

You're the one with whom i'd spend
my each and every day,
loving you so tenderly
in every single way.
You're everything that i could love
if given half a chance,
and i would spend my life with you
each day filled with romance.

Yes, i wish that i could tell you
but where, and how to start,
just how does one begin to share
the secrets of their heart.

John Kent. 14/2/2003 © [comments] => 4 [counter] => 269 [topic] => 2 [informant] => TsunamiWaverider [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 143 [ratings] => 30 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

SECRETS OF THE HEART

Contributed by TsunamiWaverider on Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 07:04:13 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I wish that i could tell you
of all the things i feel,
all the feelings trapped inside
my heart cannot reveal.
It's not enough to tell you
that you're always on my mind,
you need to know you're everything
i've tried so hard to find.

You're the ray of sunshine
on my bleak and dismal day,
and thoughts of you help to keep
my lonliness at bay.
You're the friend who's always there
the one who makes me smile,
your charm can melt the coldest heart
your witching eyes beguile.

You're the one i'd love to love
the one whom i desire,
the one who makes my heartbeat race
and sets my heart on fire.
You're the first thing that i think of
each morning when i wake,
and with each and every breath i breathe
with thoughts of you i ache.

You're the one with whom i'd spend
my each and every day,
loving you so tenderly
in every single way.
You're everything that i could love
if given half a chance,
and i would spend my life with you
each day filled with romance.

Yes, i wish that i could tell you
but where, and how to start,
just how does one begin to share
the secrets of their heart.

John Kent. 14/2/2003 ©

Copyright Â© TsunamiWaverider ... [ 2009-09-15 19:04:13]
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Re: SECRETS OF THE HEART (User Rating: 1 )
by christinalwk on Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 07:15:59 PM AEST
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Wow! Fantastical poem! Very emotional and raw... but polished at the same time!! Keep Writing =]

Re: SECRETS OF THE HEART (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 07:23:57 PM AEST
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Nice touch. I think this is my favorite of yours so far. elle :)

Re: SECRETS OF THE HEART (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 08:04:46 PM AEST
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Beautiful piece!

Re: SECRETS OF THE HEART (User Rating: 1 )
by jessb3 on Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 12:29:21 AM AEST
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Very nice poem! I could relate to it the whole time I was reading it. :o)

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