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Array ( [sid] => 153225 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What would you say [time] => 2009-09-14 17:34:44 [hometext] => It's not my best one, but I used to think like this. Sometimes I still do. [bodytext] => If I cut my wrist and I start to bleed
would you care about my wants; would you care about my needs
If I'm not able to see another day
What would you do; what would you say

If I jumped out the window that is five stories high
would you laugh of joy or would you cry
If I start taking pills and I know it's not okay
What would you do; what would you say

If you said it would harm me and I do it anyway
If I get hit by standing out on the roadway
If I said I want to leave the earth cause I don't want to stay
What would you do; what would you say [comments] => 3 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Keykey [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

What would you say

Contributed by Keykey on Monday, 14th September 2009 @ 05:34:44 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

If I cut my wrist and I start to bleed
would you care about my wants; would you care about my needs
If I'm not able to see another day
What would you do; what would you say

If I jumped out the window that is five stories high
would you laugh of joy or would you cry
If I start taking pills and I know it's not okay
What would you do; what would you say

If you said it would harm me and I do it anyway
If I get hit by standing out on the roadway
If I said I want to leave the earth cause I don't want to stay
What would you do; what would you say

Copyright © Keykey ... [ 2009-09-14 17:34:44]
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Re: What would you say (User Rating: 1 )
by TsunamiWaverider on Monday, 14th September 2009 @ 10:46:53 PM AEST
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Great poem actually Keykey, but needs a little work to make it 'flow'.

Re: What would you say (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 06:23:48 PM AEST
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No one could read this and not feel the pain written into it. As someone who has been there himself, I know how much it hurts.

I wouldn't have thought it possible back then, but it does get better. It just takes time and the support of someone who cares about you.

Hold on a little longer, and you'll see what I mean. I speak from experience.

And in answer to the question in your poem, I'd say, "Please, don't do it," and I'd offer you a shoulder to lean on.

Re: What would you say (User Rating: 1 )
by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on Thursday, 17th September 2009 @ 03:27:28 PM AEST
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I would say it's your choice.
Compelling reading.
Believe.
xx

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