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am sitting here accepting no discussion
in a dark street lonely n i have no expressions
confused ....should i cry or return to ma self pain injection
or go back to the same old T junction
i swear all i want is to get outta depression

i dont find any person worth the risk tension
am train but results dont show any gd intention
so am now up to drinking n smoking,,, thats what u people call self distruction
n nobody gives any damn attention

should i give up n be an all time loser
or keep trying till ma death becomes sooner

help me find the way
help me reach the bay

am in a bit of shame
am so charged wd pain

i guess ill just shut up n jump off this madness train ! [comments] => 1 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 32 [informant] => hetlerkh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Live happy or die tryin to be

Contributed by hetlerkh on Monday, 14th September 2009 @ 04:42:27 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Live happy or die trying to be

am sitting here accepting no discussion
in a dark street lonely n i have no expressions
confused ....should i cry or return to ma self pain injection
or go back to the same old T junction
i swear all i want is to get outta depression

i dont find any person worth the risk tension
am train but results dont show any gd intention
so am now up to drinking n smoking,,, thats what u people call self distruction
n nobody gives any damn attention

should i give up n be an all time loser
or keep trying till ma death becomes sooner

help me find the way
help me reach the bay

am in a bit of shame
am so charged wd pain

i guess ill just shut up n jump off this madness train !

Copyright © hetlerkh ... [ 2009-09-14 16:42:27]
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Re: Live happy or die tryin to be (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Monday, 14th September 2009 @ 11:07:31 PM AEST
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i wish "happiness" wasnt what we all strive for... it makes me say, "Is that what life is all about? just being happy?"

no, to me life is more than just joy... it's about justice. people tend to forget about that vital concept.

any way, i hope my comment has somehow changed your view bout life positively a little.

u've written an experience everyone goes thru, and its hard to overcome it. keep writing the agony out, it helps

take care

-K.Z.

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