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emptiness

seeps through the surface

small indentation
pierced indication

of collaspe [comments] => 6 [counter] => 245 [topic] => 61 [informant] => elle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

my bubble. . .

Contributed by elle on Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 05:17:34 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

consumed by. . .

emptiness

seeps through the surface

small indentation
pierced indication

of collaspe

Copyright © elle ... [ 2009-09-13 05:17:34]
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Re: my bubble. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 06:41:28 AM AEST
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my dear elle,

oh sweetie this is enormous! It's incredible how you
can take so few words and cultivate an emotion to
the point where your reader actually breathes it.
Your work is unbelievable.

And this .. damn. This is just too real for me.
It's unbearably emotive, hun.

Excellent post!

~ Breezy

Re: my bubble. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by TsunamiWaverider on Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 09:16:21 AM AEST
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You misspelled 'collapse' Elle. Don't forget to double check before posting.

Re: my bubble. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 14th September 2009 @ 10:53:03 AM AEST
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Aw, huge hug, my dear Elle. I hates it when bubbles burst. Except maybe those ones ya' blow. Perhaps, buy a bottle and go for it. They can be fun in a simple sort of way and you can forget about your troubles, at least for the fifteen minutes it takes to use the bottle up.

Take care,

Tim
:-)

Re: my bubble. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by hetlerkh on Monday, 14th September 2009 @ 04:50:16 PM AEST
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rocks ! m/
heh u can write my whole poems i wrote till now and give all same emotions and meaning with some words !
lol
keep it up ...
really awsome
t.c

Re: my bubble. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by one-curly-fry on Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 03:51:22 AM AEST
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Man, I've been there.. You really know how to use ur words - for such a short piece, you again make a powerful statement.

The last line left me stumped and feeling a little down...

Great write Elle.. hope someone is there to give u a little warmth. :-)

- Tim

Re: my bubble. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 05:35:35 PM AEST
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I can't decide whether this is about freedom, individuality or regret! Nice lay out though.

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