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Array ( [sid] => 153116 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I am dying… [time] => 2009-09-11 23:37:09 [hometext] => For Rohini Bal..the girl with the most beautiful eyes on planet earth...my love...my life.... [bodytext] => I have tried many ways and means to reach you,
friends, family and more,
something awful has happened, it’s so difficult to reach you.

It’s been days that I have heard your voice,
as I climb the ladder of work again,
there is a premium on my voice.

I hear you whisper in my ear,
I open my eyes and turn around,
it seems you have disappeared.

I never knew not been of the same religion would be a problem,
I thought humanity and love were religions in themselves,
I was wrong, it’s my problem.

I don’t know what it takes to get the girl you love, in your life,
You left my life,
like a wave that lashes the shore and retreats,
It’s a miracle that I am alive.

You let all of us down in your own way,
I was shattered,
yet somehow I found my way.

Everyday seems to be endless,
sleep is no longer a necessity,
it’s more like a luxury,
for multiple times in a day my headaches,
every time I feel your hand on my head, yet my heart aches.

I am dying,
every single day.
Now I know a day without love, is worth a thousand deaths.
I have put a smile on the white board of my life,
everyday is a bonus with you not in my life.

They say whatever happens, happens for the good,
I don’t believe it, you not been around is doing me no good.

I pray to God, take me away,
I have failed in all sense; death seems to be the only way.

I am dying without you,
every breath is a struggle.

I am dying without you,
at every step I falter without you.

I am dying without been treated for my heartache,
embrace me almighty Lord, I have no one but you to embrace.


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I am dying…

Contributed by bhavik on Friday, 11th September 2009 @ 11:37:09 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished



I have tried many ways and means to reach you,
friends, family and more,
something awful has happened, it’s so difficult to reach you.

It’s been days that I have heard your voice,
as I climb the ladder of work again,
there is a premium on my voice.

I hear you whisper in my ear,
I open my eyes and turn around,
it seems you have disappeared.

I never knew not been of the same religion would be a problem,
I thought humanity and love were religions in themselves,
I was wrong, it’s my problem.

I don’t know what it takes to get the girl you love, in your life,
You left my life,
like a wave that lashes the shore and retreats,
It’s a miracle that I am alive.

You let all of us down in your own way,
I was shattered,
yet somehow I found my way.

Everyday seems to be endless,
sleep is no longer a necessity,
it’s more like a luxury,
for multiple times in a day my headaches,
every time I feel your hand on my head, yet my heart aches.

I am dying,
every single day.
Now I know a day without love, is worth a thousand deaths.
I have put a smile on the white board of my life,
everyday is a bonus with you not in my life.

They say whatever happens, happens for the good,
I don’t believe it, you not been around is doing me no good.

I pray to God, take me away,
I have failed in all sense; death seems to be the only way.

I am dying without you,
every breath is a struggle.

I am dying without you,
at every step I falter without you.

I am dying without been treated for my heartache,
embrace me almighty Lord, I have no one but you to embrace.






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Re: I am dying… (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Saturday, 12th September 2009 @ 05:55:55 AM AEST
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a truly beautiful declaration of love. . . peace elle


Re: I am dying… (User Rating: 1 )
by lesoleilnoire on Saturday, 12th September 2009 @ 08:56:43 PM AEST
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Beautiful piece. The imagery is amazing as is the pure emotion of deep love. I hope you two reconnect soon an become closer than ever.


Re: I am dying… (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyRose on Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 04:18:00 AM AEST
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oh! I know the feeling and it is not a very good one but believe me the sun will shine again.....you will learn to live without the love you speak of even though your feelings are still raw.....with time those wounds do heal and I hope that time is soon for you.......and He loves you more than that love will ever love you,remember that!!!!!!

LadyRose




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