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Array ( [sid] => 15294 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => ~~*~~Invasion of the body snatchers~~*~~ [time] => 2003-03-31 09:05:00 [hometext] => Plzzzzz comment or vote or anything...tell me if you hate it i don't care i just wanna know!!!
This is the way my High School is I feel like it's being takin' over by aliens!!! [bodytext] => ~~*~~Invasion of the body snatchers~~*~~
it happened here
you just don’t know it
no one does
I’m the only one who cares
you all have no emotions
I get stuck with them all
how the hell I escaped u
I don’t know
but I wish I didn’t
now I have to hide who I am
no feelings
not even a grin
but I always have
I will always have to
I guess that’s how I survived u
hiding out in the open
right in front of you

u all hatched outta ***** pods
but you still stare
you sense I’m different
and I stare cuz your all friggin’ insane
but I already have to do...stuff...to make me feel alive
if I was you I would die
I would kill myself just to see me bleed
is it not enough to breath
for u people
do I have to die
for u people
emotionless drug attics who lie and steel
and cus God holy name

I can’t even sleep
even though the invasion is over
you still haunt my dreams
cover me in cob webs of my lost souls festering regrets of all degrees
it’s so hot were I am now
but it will be so cold tonight

I smell the flowers that grow from your pods
the sweet poison that u deceive with
but damn it you smell, look, taste so good on the out side
but I know better than to let u take over

your what I want but can’t have
your what I don’t
but still I do
what’s bad for me’s
best for you
let me help you see
please

but I just want to know
it rips and tears and my pale flesh and bones
how longs will it be before you know
before you find out
I’m not like you
today
tomorrow
next year
how long will I hide in the open
making excuses for me tears
but I gotta keep it strong before the pains turn into fears

a word to wise
if there’s any one left
who’s just like me
don’t smell the roses
and defiantly don’t dream

they take your emotions and
steel your soul
and leave you nothingness
a void
a black hole
but to be truthful
it’s not so bad
it’s true there’s no happiness
but also no sad
we all might get alone
I see it every day
evi-damn-dently I’m the only one who disagrees
but that’s ok I payed my dues
I let you step on me
and now I’m through
but you have to make your own decisions on what to do
emotions, affections, happiness, and love
tears, and sadness, lies and fears to over come
murder and hate
guilt and regrets
fakeness and fraud
mommy’s a hore
and daddy’s on drugs

well I don’t know about you
but I bid you all farewell
and
~~*~~good night~~*~~

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Percursors [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
~~*~~Invasion of the body snatchers~~*~~

Contributed by Percursors on Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



~~*~~Invasion of the body snatchers~~*~~
it happened here
you just don’t know it
no one does
I’m the only one who cares
you all have no emotions
I get stuck with them all
how the hell I escaped u
I don’t know
but I wish I didn’t
now I have to hide who I am
no feelings
not even a grin
but I always have
I will always have to
I guess that’s how I survived u
hiding out in the open
right in front of you

u all hatched outta ***** pods
but you still stare
you sense I’m different
and I stare cuz your all friggin’ insane
but I already have to do...stuff...to make me feel alive
if I was you I would die
I would kill myself just to see me bleed
is it not enough to breath
for u people
do I have to die
for u people
emotionless drug attics who lie and steel
and cus God holy name

I can’t even sleep
even though the invasion is over
you still haunt my dreams
cover me in cob webs of my lost souls festering regrets of all degrees
it’s so hot were I am now
but it will be so cold tonight

I smell the flowers that grow from your pods
the sweet poison that u deceive with
but damn it you smell, look, taste so good on the out side
but I know better than to let u take over

your what I want but can’t have
your what I don’t
but still I do
what’s bad for me’s
best for you
let me help you see
please

but I just want to know
it rips and tears and my pale flesh and bones
how longs will it be before you know
before you find out
I’m not like you
today
tomorrow
next year
how long will I hide in the open
making excuses for me tears
but I gotta keep it strong before the pains turn into fears

a word to wise
if there’s any one left
who’s just like me
don’t smell the roses
and defiantly don’t dream

they take your emotions and
steel your soul
and leave you nothingness
a void
a black hole
but to be truthful
it’s not so bad
it’s true there’s no happiness
but also no sad
we all might get alone
I see it every day
evi-damn-dently I’m the only one who disagrees
but that’s ok I payed my dues
I let you step on me
and now I’m through
but you have to make your own decisions on what to do
emotions, affections, happiness, and love
tears, and sadness, lies and fears to over come
murder and hate
guilt and regrets
fakeness and fraud
mommy’s a hore
and daddy’s on drugs

well I don’t know about you
but I bid you all farewell
and
~~*~~good night~~*~~





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Re: ~~*~~Invasion of the body snatchers~~*~~ (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 09:56:18 AM AEST
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I liked this. Lots of thoughts within this piece. Very creative and well-written. It is hard to show individuality in school, and much easier to mask your emotions. Hang in there. You'll find someone else who cares.


Re: ~~*~~Invasion of the body snatchers~~*~~ (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 01:51:48 PM AEST
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Wow... I really enjoyed this. Great write! Blessed be,

~ Moonlit Angel


Re: ~~*~~Invasion of the body snatchers~~*~~ (User Rating: 1 )
by knowWhat_kind on Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 12:47:52 AM AEST
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WOW! that was really great I liked it alot




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