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COLD SWEAT TRICKLES DOWN ON ME, I'M IN FRIGHT
NIGHTMARES INVADE MY MIND, MY SOUL
BUT I DON'T WANT TO FACE THEM, I'M DIGGING DEEPER IN THIS HOLE.

I FEEL LIKE I'M IN HELL, MY LIFE IS HELL
AND I'M THAT LONELY CHEESE IN THE FARMER IN THE DELL
NO WHERE TO TURN TO, NO WHERE TO RUN
I THINK OF THIS AND REACH IN MY DRESSER TO PULL OUT MY GUN
I FEEL LIKE I'M RUNNING OUT OF TIME
SHOULD I LEAVE THIS WORLD BEHIND?

PRAYING FOR HEAVEN FOR I SEE HELL EVERYDAY
I PUT THE GUN TO MY TEMPLE, MY HAND ALREADY KNOWING THE WAY
I PULL THE TRIGGER. I HARDLY FEEL PAIN
THEN I SEE MY BLOOD FALL LIKE RAIN
UP ON THE CEILING, ON THE FLOOR, ON MY BED
THEN I CLOSE MY EYES FOR NOW I'M DEAD.

DARKNESS SEEPS IN, I LEAVE MY BODY BEHIND
THINKING I LEFT MY LIFE JUST IN TIME
EXCLAIMING, "YES! GOD WILL TAKE ME TONIGHT!"
HOPING TO SEE THAT LIGHT SO BRIGHT
BUT INSTEAD I SEE DARK, EVIL DEMONS COMING OUT OF THE FLOOR
AND I REALIZE I HAVE TO LIVE IN HELL ONCE MORE. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 140 [topic] => 13 [informant] => JAMIEAG27 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

REVELATIONS

Contributed by JAMIEAG27 on Saturday, 5th September 2009 @ 07:28:39 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

AS I WAKE UP IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT
COLD SWEAT TRICKLES DOWN ON ME, I'M IN FRIGHT
NIGHTMARES INVADE MY MIND, MY SOUL
BUT I DON'T WANT TO FACE THEM, I'M DIGGING DEEPER IN THIS HOLE.

I FEEL LIKE I'M IN HELL, MY LIFE IS HELL
AND I'M THAT LONELY CHEESE IN THE FARMER IN THE DELL
NO WHERE TO TURN TO, NO WHERE TO RUN
I THINK OF THIS AND REACH IN MY DRESSER TO PULL OUT MY GUN
I FEEL LIKE I'M RUNNING OUT OF TIME
SHOULD I LEAVE THIS WORLD BEHIND?

PRAYING FOR HEAVEN FOR I SEE HELL EVERYDAY
I PUT THE GUN TO MY TEMPLE, MY HAND ALREADY KNOWING THE WAY
I PULL THE TRIGGER. I HARDLY FEEL PAIN
THEN I SEE MY BLOOD FALL LIKE RAIN
UP ON THE CEILING, ON THE FLOOR, ON MY BED
THEN I CLOSE MY EYES FOR NOW I'M DEAD.

DARKNESS SEEPS IN, I LEAVE MY BODY BEHIND
THINKING I LEFT MY LIFE JUST IN TIME
EXCLAIMING, "YES! GOD WILL TAKE ME TONIGHT!"
HOPING TO SEE THAT LIGHT SO BRIGHT
BUT INSTEAD I SEE DARK, EVIL DEMONS COMING OUT OF THE FLOOR
AND I REALIZE I HAVE TO LIVE IN HELL ONCE MORE.

Copyright © JAMIEAG27 ... [ 2009-09-05 19:28:39]
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Re: REVELATIONS (User Rating: 1 )
by joydeep_nath on Saturday, 5th September 2009 @ 11:59:04 PM AEST
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well written i could feel yr pain and unspeakable secrets....i written that kinda poetry

Re: REVELATIONS (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th September 2009 @ 10:12:47 AM AEST
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Very deep and dark just the way I like them
Great job on the rhyming and wonderful structure.

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