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What i'm supposed to do
Because you know I love him
But we're about to be through

I just wanted to be loved
And for the love not to hurt
But what was I expecting
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Abuse

Contributed by 6whiteRoses on Friday, 4th September 2009 @ 04:19:29 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



God please show me
What i'm supposed to do
Because you know I love him
But we're about to be through

I just wanted to be loved
And for the love not to hurt
But what was I expecting
All guys treat me like dirt




Copyright © 6whiteRoses ... [ 2009-09-04 16:19:29]
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Re: Abuse (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Friday, 4th September 2009 @ 04:38:51 PM AEST
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Many times, women will choose a man who is abusive because of their own low self esteem, or because they were abused by their father/father figure.

In order to avoid abusive relationships (mind, sometimes they just happen) you should perhaps reflect on what it is that attracts you to the men you choose, and maybe evaluate your own self esteem.


Re: Abuse (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 4th September 2009 @ 07:52:55 PM AEST
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I wish you the best but most importantly get out! I did the same thing, you just have to gather up and go.

So sorry you are going through this.
Find a good support group! It will do wonders.

Hugs
Michelle


Re: Abuse (User Rating: 1 )
by InfinitePoet on Saturday, 5th September 2009 @ 12:40:35 AM AEST
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Love does hurt in So Many Ways!! Yet we are afraid so we choose to stay!! Your A talented writer,you can do way better than being hurt by anyone!! Get out and go your own painless way!! And hold your head up in pride!! Keep writing & Keep Posting!!
Peace & Hugz,
Dana


Re: Abuse (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Saturday, 5th September 2009 @ 04:10:09 AM AEST
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Hi there,

Hope you don't mind a comment from a man?

Am assuming physical as well as mental abuse?
It's not a 'man' you know - he ceased to be a man
the moment the abuse started. No DECENT man
abuses those who love him.

This may not be apparent to you at the moment,
but there are more decent males out there than
those who darkly prey on the vulnerable.
Be strong!

Tommy


Re: Abuse (User Rating: 1 )
by Antzus on Saturday, 5th September 2009 @ 07:25:03 PM AEST
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I like how succinct that was. No extraneous bits in that poem - it delivers its message and then GTFO.

The pain of severing ties with an abuser is lot less than the pain of maintaining the abusive relationship. You'll forget him soon enough. Focus on yourself more, when you next start a relationship. Identify your needs - your REAL needs - and make sure you're getting something positive out of the relationship. There's a lot of dirtbag guys out there, I admit, but if you're willing to not put up with them then you'll find there's some good ones too.


Re: Abuse (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th September 2009 @ 10:24:42 AM AEST
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Oh dear. *Phil feels guilty for being a guy*

I genuinely want to say something profound and moving, but I'm not sure what. All I can say is that any man who hits a woman is a despicable monster who should have his heart ripped out.





Re: Abuse (User Rating: 1 )
by Xjordanary on Sunday, 6th September 2009 @ 11:53:59 PM AEST
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totally agree with phil, and i am a guy. There is one problem though, phil, and that is that if a guy is abusive, he has no heart to rip out.




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