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pseudo with love

Contributed by hungarianhaze on Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 06:59:07 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Ir relative to her conjured emotion
Unresponsive to my bearing demise
She asks he self " why, why him?"

Her scent, her kiss miraged with death
The bitter question he asks him self
Is she the one to take my breath?

Is she to take the black marbled walls
Turn them to ecstasy with humbling abyss

My heart skips with her sight in triune
Love transformed me, is she mine?
My dreamy thoughts, crystallized with coated spite

But it wasnt meant to be
my heart inteded to immense cries
The baron she is, keen to self resilience

Kill me now, this pain must end
kill me now, I live saturated in albatross
hyperbolic in her anger

Fate lied

The autumn leaves reflect off the summer gaze
A fresh start sparks from the autumn breeze
love will find your way
Love will smile upon you at the end of every day
I will compose my self and reminisce in my current exhaustion




Copyright © hungarianhaze ... [ 2009-09-03 18:59:07]
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Re: pseudo with love (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 07:25:29 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feeling, welcome to ypdc:)

hugs n' love nessa


Re: pseudo with love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 4th September 2009 @ 01:06:49 PM AEST
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How wonderfully FULL this is! Your metaphors are incredible
and your word choices are perfection. It breathes and builds
until the heart implodes from pure, unrestrained emotion.
DAMN! Your talent surely shines in this piece. I will be
looking to your page again. I truly adore that last stanza.


Beautiful work ~


~ Breezy



Re: pseudo with love (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 06:13:06 AM AEST
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WOW, so beautifully writen, I felt your every word. keep writing I will be looking for more.
sp


Re: pseudo with love (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 26th December 2010 @ 09:13:41 PM AEST
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Your writing leaves speechless>>>>>>

Blessings,
emy




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