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The Tree with the Door
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 05:05:56 PM in AEST
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Ancient tree of life,
a door dares me to enter,
mystery awaits
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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Re: The Tree with the Door
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 07:38:55 PM AEST
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Lovely....picturing it here..
Jenni |
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Re: The Tree with the Door
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 08:23:39 PM AEST
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magical...
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: The Tree with the Door
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 01:52:03 PM AEST
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oooouuuu ...me likes!!! The title, I must confess, made me think of The
Nightmare Before Christmas (one of my most favoured movies!). This haiku
reads like the beginning of a fantasy story. Like the tales of Narnia. What
adventures lie in wait? Wonderfully provocative piece! :)
~ Breezy |
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Re: The Tree with the Door
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 02:17:38 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Tree with the Door
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by zenith66 on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 03:11:00 PM AEST
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yes a very mysteriously fantastic write!!
i just love a good haiku and thats great!
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Re: The Tree with the Door
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 04:56:49 PM AEST
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Yep, top class. What more can I say?
-Phil |
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Re: The Tree with the Door
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by Voice of the Silent on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 05:39:16 PM AEST
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we are offered many doors in life, yet I've never been offered a door that was still apart of the tree, mysterious indeed. Mysteries are interesting I suggest you explore further beyond the threshold Great poem as always
hope to read more soon
-Kelly |
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