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Necramour
Contributed by
Antzus
on
Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 12:55:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Thine eyes - rife with ardent disdain
a searing scythe through bloated vein
besieges life with relentless pain
this thou dost unto me.
Tear my gristle from within
ripped to pieces limb-by-limb
writhing tendrils pierce my skin
is this not what you want?
As blade impales my belly's under
pulsing entrails are pulled asunder
(and) here I flail as thy bloodied hands plunder
have you got what you want?
Dash my skull against the floor
thou batter and bludgeon with dark rancour
my altar's awash with blood and gore
thus hast thou done unto me.
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Antzus
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Re: Necramour
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by elle on
Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 07:11:40 AM AEST
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| Dang, that is dark! I think the words punctuate themselves. elle |
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Re: Necramour
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by emystar on
Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 10:17:43 PM AEST
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Gorishly savage but well understood and written.
Incredible writing.
Huggs, blessings,
emy
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Re: Necramour
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by hungarianhaze on
Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 02:43:59 PM AEST
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| This is a killer poem man , sent me right to imagery |
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