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[title] => Tears fall without you
[time] => 2009-08-29 15:36:17
[hometext] => When day turns to night, colors are dull, and flavors are tasteless. You feel this poem.
[bodytext] => Alone I am dark, clouded, and lost. There is no more hope again the day begins as night, but never changes. I hide away from this, I crawl for I am to weak to walk, tears begin to fall as I struggle to keep moving. The nights start to become colder and sometimes the weather takes half the pain away. I try to open my eyes though they burn casted red from exuastion. Away I'm locked inside close I am freed. No longer will I be close enough to feel your skin against my own, no longer will I be able to say a phrase that has the power to change the world only for you, and no more will I keep warm in the night holding on to you. I hear the usual sounds of forgetting, but I will not stop my love that still exsists in my soul and heart. I fall to the ground immobilizing weakness overcomes me I reach a outstretched into the the darkness hoping that you'll grab it. I begin to question my existance in this Where is my place those who put my into it put me where they think i belong, but I am still confused an haven't fallen in line. I lose my beLIEf in your return, I try to gain a grip on this reality, but without you I've lost all hope. I begin to lose my place, my mind, and any chance at regaining love once again. I whisper a prayer into the darkness that has gone unheard by the deafening silence. I fully collapse and finally lay myself to rest, but cannot find peace. You cross my mind for the last time as my last breaths are taken. I am alone crushed an putting your memories away. I am non-exsistant I inhabit this world no more.
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Tears fall without you
Contributed by
Mrmatt
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Saturday, 29th August 2009 @ 03:36:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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Alone I am dark, clouded, and lost. There is no more hope again the day begins as night, but never changes. I hide away from this, I crawl for I am to weak to walk, tears begin to fall as I struggle to keep moving. The nights start to become colder and sometimes the weather takes half the pain away. I try to open my eyes though they burn casted red from exuastion. Away I'm locked inside close I am freed. No longer will I be close enough to feel your skin against my own, no longer will I be able to say a phrase that has the power to change the world only for you, and no more will I keep warm in the night holding on to you. I hear the usual sounds of forgetting, but I will not stop my love that still exsists in my soul and heart. I fall to the ground immobilizing weakness overcomes me I reach a outstretched into the the darkness hoping that you'll grab it. I begin to question my existance in this Where is my place those who put my into it put me where they think i belong, but I am still confused an haven't fallen in line. I lose my beLIEf in your return, I try to gain a grip on this reality, but without you I've lost all hope. I begin to lose my place, my mind, and any chance at regaining love once again. I whisper a prayer into the darkness that has gone unheard by the deafening silence. I fully collapse and finally lay myself to rest, but cannot find peace. You cross my mind for the last time as my last breaths are taken. I am alone crushed an putting your memories away. I am non-exsistant I inhabit this world no more.
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Re: Tears fall without you
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by emystar on
Saturday, 29th August 2009 @ 06:52:07 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
I can totaly relate to this sad write from my past.
I hope you feel better real soon.
Hang tuff.
Huggs, healing,
emy |
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Re: Tears fall without you
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by InfinitePoet on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 01:00:37 AM AEST
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Bravo!! Very nice piece!! It really did make me stop 2 think of how it would feel to be in this frame of mind,to be in this type of pain and lonliness alone and also being driven to the point of deciding this was your last work that will ever be read by abyone!!! I commend you on your courage and your strength to keep om writing even though it seems so diffucult a time 4 you!!! Please use this as A stepping stone and walk on the stones across the depths of the pain filled confusion layered chaos creek of life and write another awesome piece as soon as you reach the other side!! You Will Have Survived the Scum of the pond!! Then C'mon get your butt in gear and write (US) your fellow poets A great piece about it so we all too can survive the friggin ponds of scum! Survive the loneliness even if for a brief while!! You gave me A big push towards being positive this coming week period!!!
Keep Writing & Posting!!
Peace & Hugz,
Dana |
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Re: Tears fall without you
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by FireStarter on
Saturday, 2nd January 2016 @ 03:29:46 PM AEST
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| I know this might be too late but i hope you feel better :) good poem |
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