Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 17:48:42 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 152700 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => LEASONS I'VE LEARNED [time] => 2009-08-29 03:02:24 [hometext] => Another old one [bodytext] => People look at me in amaze.
That girl want learn to the grave.
What they don't see is tucked inside.
It wasn't a failure.
We both tried.

Didn't take the wrong path.
It just wasn't meant to last.
At least we don't have to wonder anymore.
Someone else has shut the door.
It's not what or how it turned.
The answer's in leason we learned.

Copyright © emystar ...
Monday, June 24 2002 @ 14:16:00 AEST [comments] => 3 [counter] => 330 [topic] => 43 [informant] => emystar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

LEASONS I'VE LEARNED

Contributed by emystar on Saturday, 29th August 2009 @ 03:02:24 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

People look at me in amaze.
That girl want learn to the grave.
What they don't see is tucked inside.
It wasn't a failure.
We both tried.

Didn't take the wrong path.
It just wasn't meant to last.
At least we don't have to wonder anymore.
Someone else has shut the door.
It's not what or how it turned.
The answer's in leason we learned.

Copyright © emystar ...
Monday, June 24 2002 @ 14:16:00 AEST

Copyright Â© emystar ... [ 2009-08-29 03:02:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: LEASONS I'VE LEARNED (User Rating: 1 )
by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 08:11:57 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Well, it took a while to get there, there's a couple of grammatical errors, but it said what it was intended to say at the end. I'll try another one.

Re: LEASONS I'VE LEARNED (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 05:42:40 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

We've all been given our lessons. You actually learned something from it. A lot of people never do.

But there's another point you made when you wrote:

Didn't take the wrong path.
It just wasn't meant to last.
Even fewer people will get it.

Being honest, with yourself and the person you're with, is the biggest part of any relationship and whether to end it or keep it going.

Good writing. Lesson learned.

Re: LEASONS I'VE LEARNED (User Rating: 1 )
by canyouhearme on Tuesday, 6th April 2010 @ 01:51:55 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Lesson Learned indeed, emystar.
Good outlook!

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com