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The night is filled with stillness
yet the city noise is there.
Though the void of moon and stars
suffocates each sound.

Searching for the soft glow
the clouds have covered over.
Watching the leaves,
sway softly in the breeze.

My heart, it seemed to trip,
and it fell down upon the ground.
Left to shatter and bleed
soiled pavement all around.

It feels like rain will soon drop
like the Heavens are crying.
A breath of fall is in the air
a soul lays dorment and freezing.

My heart, it seemed to trip,
and it fell down upon the ground.
I walked away, left it to shatter and bleed
on the dark ground by itself. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 48 [informant] => shelby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

~Trip~

Contributed by shelby on Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 10:28:25 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

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The night is filled with stillness
yet the city noise is there.
Though the void of moon and stars
suffocates each sound.

Searching for the soft glow
the clouds have covered over.
Watching the leaves,
sway softly in the breeze.

My heart, it seemed to trip,
and it fell down upon the ground.
Left to shatter and bleed
soiled pavement all around.

It feels like rain will soon drop
like the Heavens are crying.
A breath of fall is in the air
a soul lays dorment and freezing.

My heart, it seemed to trip,
and it fell down upon the ground.
I walked away, left it to shatter and bleed
on the dark ground by itself.

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2009-08-28 22:28:25]
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Re: ~Trip~ (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 10:51:38 PM AEST
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Sad but beautifully written.
The graphics are awesome. It looks like you picked a graphic then wrote the poem.
good work girl.
big huggs, luv, blessings,
emy

Re: ~Trip~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 06:34:33 PM AEST
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gut wrenching stuff here, girly girl. I feel ya~

I wish I could write you a better song sweetie, but one day soon, you'll
soar and all these barriers to happiness and cloud filled days will be in the past.

You write with such emotion. It is sometimes too painful to read.

*hugs you so tight*

~ Breezy
♥

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