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[sid] => 152627
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => goodnight, love.
[time] => 2009-08-27 12:31:42
[hometext] => this one was written about a night my girlfriend was out of town for a few weeks. Im pleased with it and how well it came out.
[bodytext] => here i am alone in this dark and empty house searching for you, still blindly looking around eventhough i know you had to go and leave town but your voice still rings in my head like the sweetest sound waiting for when you'll be back that night then maybe I'll have enough empathy to turn on these lights cause without you, there is nothing worth using my sight i swear there is no more painful words than goodbye but they say patients is a virtue and Im know i can wait this week or two cause i would wait forever to be with you and when you left, that was something you already knew and as the floor creeks like a shadow haunting me i finally go to bed so i can at least see you in my dream stumbling to the bedroom in my worn out jeans home as dark as my heart when i heard you had to leave but still i manage to find my way like an anecdote for how we started to date the darkness reminds me of what i hate the lonely and cold feeling you made go away so for that, i love you so much and I'll count the hours until i get to feel your hug as i fall asleep alone in this bed all snug wasting time till, again i get to see you, my love. goodnight. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 2 [informant] => owkenny [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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