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Outsider.
Contributed by
BCG
on
Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 06:28:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The day you chose the path your on put everything on hold,
put every average day aside, and every girls day out got shut down.
Copyright ©
BCG
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2009-08-24 18:28:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Outsider.
(User Rating: 1 ) by ChenoaShiningwater on
Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 06:44:40 PM AEST (User
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Two lil lines...and you said it all!
Great expression.
Do take care *smiles* |
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Re: Outsider.
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 06:50:53 PM AEST (User
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Yes two lines but profound lines.
Good work, would like to see more.
Michelle |
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Re: Outsider.
(User Rating: 1 ) by jenniferstein2006 on
Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 09:18:32 PM AEST (User
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so little yet so much...good write! |
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