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Standing on a mountain
Contributed by
shaza
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Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 12:30:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Standing on a mountain looking at the edge, such a fine line over life and death, a thought crosses by, of good times gone by, a feeling of peace floats by, a man so loved, hand held high over tough times gone by, no cries, no goodbyes, because theres no goodtime to say goodbye.
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Re: Standing on a mountain
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 05:05:25 PM AEST
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lovely expression of feeling,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Standing on a mountain
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by spud on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 01:34:54 AM AEST
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Hi Shaza,
Welcome to YPDC. Nice to have a fellow Scot
joins us. Thanks your comment on 'Denis'.
Your poem was short and succint, and said it all.
I share the emotion.
Tommy (in Hamilton)
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