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Array ( [sid] => 152501 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Too deep for me [time] => 2009-08-23 12:00:21 [hometext] => .........just today I thought of him and it felt as strong as it felt when I had his heart,yet I am so confused because we are worlds apart...... [bodytext] => TOO DEEP FOR ME


Me and you....
in my dream
lost in thought.
you are my lover
I am completely satistied
yet the only penetration that took place
was how you pierced my heart
without saying good bye
Me and you....
having intimate closeness
so close
the inner layer of my skin moved
with the beats of you heart
your kisses felt like heavens rain
soft and gentle
moistening the feminine depths of me
a touch from your hands made me crumble
made my body so hot
every piece of clothing I had on
would melt off
the look in your eyes......
hypnotic
take me too that climax
dont dear leave me.

......but you did
and I understand.....
the heat between you and I
is to much for us to bear.......

Yet the hunger wont leave me at rest...
My lover I long for your depth....

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 2 [informant] => LadyRose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Too deep for me

Contributed by LadyRose on Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 12:00:21 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



TOO DEEP FOR ME


Me and you....
in my dream
lost in thought.
you are my lover
I am completely satistied
yet the only penetration that took place
was how you pierced my heart
without saying good bye
Me and you....
having intimate closeness
so close
the inner layer of my skin moved
with the beats of you heart
your kisses felt like heavens rain
soft and gentle
moistening the feminine depths of me
a touch from your hands made me crumble
made my body so hot
every piece of clothing I had on
would melt off
the look in your eyes......
hypnotic
take me too that climax
dont dear leave me.

......but you did
and I understand.....
the heat between you and I
is to much for us to bear.......

Yet the hunger wont leave me at rest...
My lover I long for your depth....





Copyright © LadyRose ... [ 2009-08-23 12:00:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Too deep for me (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 02:19:56 PM AEST
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well written with emotion, never give on the one that means so much to you ,
a friend in words,,spooky


Re: Too deep for me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 04:45:32 PM AEST
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Sad but well written.
It's really hard 'cause us women luv with all we have in us but men or some can just bolt and move on to the next one or at least that;s what I've experienced many times before.
Hang tuff.
big huggs, blessings,
emy




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